Hello TIna!

2012-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

학생이 쓴 원문

It's a Monday again. I hope that you have spent such a great time and rested enough in weekend. Let's try to our work briskly. Usually, I have studied as a watching drama in English for my listening skill and have read a English magazine for my reading skill. But I made up my mind to change my schedule. I will practice TOEIC speaking test to get a high score until I go back to my school coming March. I knew the fact that if I get score more higher that the cut off point that my school wrote in website, I could get a scholarship for about 1500000 won. So I try to practice to get a scholarship. It kills to birds with one stone because I can develop my English skill and I can get a money! Here is my homework. 1. What's the opposite of many? few 2. What's the opposite of deep? shallow 3. What's the opposite of long? short 4. What's the opposite of clean dirty 5. What's the opposite of empty? full

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon! You did a perfect homework today! Good job. I really that you\'ll get a higher score in the TOEIC test for your scholarship. I know that you can do it as long as you are persistent. Keep on practicing for your goal!

---Teacher Tina---

It\'s a Monday again.

>> It\'s Monday again.

I hope that you have spent such a great time and rested enough in weekend.

>> I hope that you had a great time and that you rested enough last weekend.

Let\'s try to our work briskly.

>> Let\'s try to work briskly.

Usually, I have studied as a watching drama in English for my listening skill and have read a English magazine for my reading skill.

>> Usually, I watch an English drama to enhance my listening skill and read an English magazine to improve my reading skill. 

But I made up my mind to change my schedule. 

>> Correct.

I will practice TOEIC speaking test to get a high score until I go back to my school coming March.

>>  I will practice TOEIC speaking test to get a high score until I go back to my school this coming March.

I knew the fact that if I get score more higher that the cut off point that my school wrote in website, I could get a scholarship for about 1500000 won.

>> I know that if I get a score higher than the cut-off that my school requires, I could get a scholarship for about  1,500,000.00 Won.

So I try to practice to get a scholarship.

>> Correct.

It kills to birds with one stone because I can develop my English skill and I can get a money!

>> It\'s hitting two birds with one stone because I can develop my English skill and I can also get a money at the same time.

Here is my homework.

1. What\'s the opposite of many? few

>> Correct.

2. What\'s the opposite of deep? shallow

>> Correct.

3. What\'s the opposite of long? short

>> Correct.

4. What\'s the opposite of clean dirty

>> Correct.

5. What\'s the opposite of empty? full

>> Correct.

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