Hello Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
It's a happy Wednesday! All right, time really flies so fast. Usually every Wednesday I have to separate garbage collection in front of my apartment. I'll do it again after I finish my part time job! oh my god! ㅠㅠ Time is really fast. Yesterday, a cute girl came to our restaurant and applied for serving staff. Suddenly all of our restaurant staffs including me cheer up. I'm very expected when I think that I work with her! HA! HA! HA! I would like to go to work early.
Have a nice day Tina! and Teacher, you give me a same idiom that is same on Monday.
Here is my homework.
1. Take this book to the library please.
2. Could you bring me some water, please.
3. He often brings his sister to her aunt.
4. When you come to my party, don't forget to bring something to drink.
5. Is peter bringing Steve to my party.
6. He takes out her the rubbish now.
강사 첨삭
Hello James! ^^
This sounds so exciting!^^
Thank you for sharing it to me.
I am really glad that you kind of trust me by telling me such stories.
So there\'s another cute girl in your restaurant. ^^ I hope that you will
get along with her. It\'s really nice to gain friends.
Just be guided on how you construct your sentences.
Oh! By the way, regarding the idiom,
I am so sorry.
I was just thinking of refreshing your mind.
I think it can be useful to sometimes go over a certain idiom for a couple of times, so you\'ll remember it.
Take care!
T.Tina^^
It\'s a happy Wednesday!
>> Correct!
All right, time really flies so fast. Usually every Wednesday I have to separate garbage collection in front of my apartment.
>> All right, time really flies so fast. Usually, every Wednesday, I have to segregate the garbage that has to be collected in front of my apartment.
I\'ll do it again after I finish my part time job! oh my god! ㅠㅠ Time is really fast.
>> Correct!
Yesterday, a cute girl came to our restaurant and applied for serving staff.
>> Yesterday, a cute girl came to our restaurant and applied as a serving staff.
Suddenly all of our restaurant staffs including me cheer up.
>> Suddenly, our restaurant staff, including me, cheered up.
I\'m very expected when I think that I work with her! HA! HA! HA!
>> I\'m very excited when I think about working with her! ^^
I would like to go to work early.
>> Correct!
Have a nice day Tina!
>> Correct!
and Teacher, you give me a same idiom that is same on Monday.
>> By the way teacher, you gave me the same idiom with Monday\'s.
Here is my homework.
>> Correct!
1. Take this book to the library please.
>> Correct!
2. Could you bring me some water, please?
>> Correct!
3. He often brings his sister to her aunt.
>> He often takes his sister to her aunt.
4. When you come to my party, don\'t forget to bring something to drink.
>> Correct!
5. Is peter bringing Steve to my party.
>> Correct!
6. He takes out her the rubbish now.
>> He is taking out the rubbish now.
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