Hello Tina!

2012-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

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Happy Wednesday! When I saw the idiom for today, I could come up with one of our staffs. He is in my bad books! Sometimes, He really has annoyed me during work. He is a bald and seems like a octopus. I really hate him. He is thirty years old but sometimes he looked like child. Sometimes he has spited some joke, but that joke was really corny! Ah...so I just ignored him and a lot of staffs that close with me cheered me up about that. So I'm fine. I just made up my mind to ignore what he said. By the way have a nice day Tina! Here is my homework. 1. Could you borrow me some moneys, please? 2. Some pupils can borrow books from their school. 3. Will you borrow me your umbrella till tomorrow. 4. Should I lend him my football? 5. You may borrow my bike, but be careful.

강사 첨삭

Hi there James!!

There are really people who will annoy us or will please us. So my advise, just ignore him. The more you spend time on this person the more that you will get irritated. ^^ Don\'t worry what\'s important is that it\'s not you who\'s annoying others. Always remember to establish a good relationship towards other people. ^^ I know you are a good man! ^^ 

Thank you for your composition today! Here are the corrections. Please be guided. Have a nice day!

T. Tina

Happy Wednesday!

>> Correct

When I saw the idiom for today, I could come up with one of our staffs.

>> When I saw the idiom for today, I remembered one of our staff members. 

He is in my bad books!

>> Correct

Sometimes, He really has annoyed me during work.

>> Sometimes he annoys me at work. 

He is a bald and seems like a octopus.

>> He is bald he looks like an octopus. 

I really hate him.

>> Correct

He is thirty years old but sometimes he looked like child.

>> He is thirty years old, but sometimes he looks like a child. 

Sometimes he has spited some joke, but that joke was really corny!

>> Sometimes, he spites me with some jokes, but they are really corny! 

Ah...so I just ignored him and a lot of staffs that close with me cheered me up about that.

>> So I just ignore him and many members of the staff who are close to me cheer me up. 

So I\'m fine.

>> Correct

I just made up my mind to ignore what he said.

>> Correct

By the way have a nice day Tina!
>> Correct

Here is my homework.
1. Could you borrow me some moneys, please?
>> Could you lend me some money, please?

2. Some pupils can borrow books from their school.
>> Correct

3. Will you borrow me your umbrella till tomorrow.
>> Will you lend me your umbrella till tomorrow?

4. Should I lend him my football?
>> Correct

5. You may borrow my bike, but be careful.

>> Correct

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