Hello Tina!

It's very very happy Friday! I will meet someone today who was the closest person when I was in army. He went his vacation out from the army. I really would like to meet him and I will hang out with him all night long. And the Octopus will break his job out today! Today is the best day in the week. By the way, have a nice weekend Tina! See you Monday! Here is my homework. 1. Do you believe in life after death? 2. There lives were lost in the fire. 3. Do you like to live in the north? 4. Have you bought the DVD with the live recording of the U2 concert? 5. Where do you live? 6. Peter still lives with his parents. 7. Have you ever seen a real life scorpion? 8. My father's words have lived with me all my. 9. Who live in the city centre? 10. My great grand father lost his life in world warII.

Good afternoon to you James!!!

KK ^^ Octopus!! You mean to say that he will not work in your store anymore? Oh.. What happened? Yeah It\'s good for you though. It\'s really nice to meet our friends. Especially if we haven\'t seen them for a while. I hope that you are going to have a blast tonight! Enjoy your time then but of course you have to take care too. We will be talking more about this on Monday. Happy Friday too! Thank you for your composition. Kindly check my corrections for today\'s homework, please. Have a great weekend!

-Teacher Tina- ^^ 

It\'s very very happy Friday! 

>>  It\'s a very happy Friday!

I will meet someone today who was the closest person when I was in army.

>>  I will meet the closest person to me when I was in the army.

He went his vacation out from the army.

>> He has a vacation from the army.

I really would like to meet him and I will hang out with him all night long. 

>> Correct.

And the Octopus will break his job out today!

>> Correct.  

Today is the best day in the week.

>>  Today is the best day of the week.

By the way, have a nice weekend Tina!

>> Correct.  

See you Monday!

>> Correct.  
Here is my homework.
>> Correct.  

1. Do you believe in life after death?

>> Correct.

2. There lives were lost in the fire.

>>Three lives were lost in the fire.

3. Do you like to live in the north?

>> Correct.

4. Have you bought the DVD with the live recording of the U2 concert?

>> Correct.

5. Where do you live?

>> Correct.

6. Peter still lives with his parents.

>> Correct.

7. Have you ever seen a real life scorpion?

>> Have you ever seen a real live scorpion?

8. My father\'s words have lived with me all my.

>> My father\'s words have lived with me all my life.

9. Who live in the city centre?

>>Who lives in the city centre?

10. My great grand father lost his life in world warII.

>> Correct.

>> OR: My great grandfather lost his life in World War II.