Hello Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there James,
Thank you for sharing your weekend plan to me. I hope that you will learn a lot of good values and lessons when you will attend the mass this Sunday. Just be happy and enjoy your weekend. See you next month :D I made some corrections for you. Please check them out.
Take care James :)
~Teacher Tina
Yeah, very happy weekend come over to us.
>>Yeah! Happy weekend is coming.
I don\'t have any special plan this weekend.
>>Correct
So I plan to go to an English church with my friend.
>>Correct
In the past, I always wanted to attend that worship but I always missed the time.
>>Correct
So, at this time, I must keep the time to attend English church on time.
>>So, i need to keep track of the time to attend that.
And then, during last time, I will prepare for my trip, work out at the gym and watch the movie that I wanted to see usually.
>>And during those times, I was preparing for my trip, worked out at the gym and watched the movie that I wanted to see.
I hope that you have a worthwhile weekend too.
>>Correct
Have a nice weekend!
>>Correct
Here is my home work.>>Correct
1. In Christmas. I have a plan to visit France in Christmas.
>>1. At Christmas. I have a plan to visit France in Christmas.
2. On Tuesday. After two weeks, on Tuesday, my class will be over.
>>Correct
3. In the weekend, I will prepare my trip in the whole weekend.
>>At the weekend, I will prepare my trip in the whole weekend.
4. On my birthday. Two years ago, on my birthday, I let my hair down with friends and I was a night owl to drink beer.
>>Correct
5. At the end of the week. I have been always happy at the end of the week. Because, just one more day, we can have a weekend.
>>Correct
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