Hello Tina!

2012-11-30 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

학생이 쓴 원문

Yeah, very happy weekend come over to us. I don't have any special plane in this weekend. So I plane to go to English church with my friend. In the past, I always wanted to attend that worship but I always missed time. So, at this time, I must keep the time to attend English church on time. And then, during last time, I will prepare for my trip, work out at the gym and watch the movie that I wanted to see usually. I hope that you have a worthwhile weekend too. Have a nice weekend! Here is my home work. 1. In Christmas. I have a plan to visit France in Christmas. 2. On Tuesday. After two weeks, on Tuesday, my class will be over. 3. In the weekend, I will prepare my trip in the whole weekend. 4. On my birthday. Two years ago, on my birthday, I let my hair down with friends and I was a night owl to drink beer. 5. At the end of the week. I have been always happy at the end of the week. Because, just one more day, we can have a weekend.

강사 첨삭

Hi there James,

              Thank you for sharing your weekend plan to me. I hope that you will learn a lot of good values and lessons when you will attend the mass this Sunday. Just be happy and enjoy your weekend. See you next month :D I made some corrections for you. Please check them out.

Take care James :)

~Teacher Tina

Yeah, very happy weekend come over to us.

>>Yeah! Happy weekend is coming.

I don\'t have any special plan this weekend. 

>>Correct

So I plan to go to an English church with my friend.

>>Correct

In the past, I always wanted to attend that worship but I always missed the time. 

>>Correct

So, at this time, I must keep the time to attend English church on time.

>>So, i need to keep track of the time to attend that.

And then, during last time, I will prepare for my trip, work out at the gym and watch the movie that I wanted to see usually.

>>And during those times, I was preparing for my trip, worked out at the gym and watched the movie that I wanted to see.

I hope that you have a worthwhile weekend too.

>>Correct

Have a nice weekend!

>>Correct

Here is my home work.
>>Correct

1. In Christmas. I have a plan to visit France in Christmas.

>>1. At Christmas. I have a plan to visit France in Christmas.

2. On Tuesday. After two weeks, on Tuesday, my class will be over.

>>Correct

3. In the weekend, I will prepare my trip in the whole weekend.

>>At the weekend, I will prepare my trip in the whole weekend.

4. On my birthday. Two years ago, on my birthday, I let my hair down with friends and I was a night owl to drink beer.

>>Correct

5. At the end of the week. I have been always happy at the end of the week. Because, just one more day, we can have a weekend.

>>Correct

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