Hello Tina!

2012-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

학생이 쓴 원문

Happy Monday again! The date that I depart to Europe have been coming. It's just left only 16 days! Oh! I really exciting. So now a days, I concentrate all of my mind for preparing Europe. It just 6 days left to practice English with you. I'm so sorry when it comes to this thing. I'll attend this class again when I'll finish my trip in coming January. So pleas wait me until that period. I'll miss you! Here is my homework. 1. to give someone a favor. 2. to have a bargain. 3. to have an examination. 4. to make a complaint. 5. to have progress. 6. to make the washing up. 7. to make money. 8. to make a reservation. 9. to make harm to someone. 10. to make a decision.

강사 첨삭

Hi there James!!

I\'m so excited for you!! Finally you will be able to go to Europe!! I am very happy for you!! Don\'t you worry everything is going to be okay! ^^ Just remember to always enjoy the things that you are doing for you to be happy in your life!! I will be waiting until you come back and I really hope to study with you again. I will miss you too James!!^^ So I want to great you Merry Christmas and A happy New year in advance for I will not be able to talk to you during the Holidays. Take care out there James!! Good luck!! See you in class tomorrow okay.. Good night!!! ^^ 

~~~T. Tina~~~

Happy Monday again!

>> Correct

The date that I depart to Europe have been coming.

>> My departure for Europe is fast approaching. 

It\'s just left only 16 days!

>> There are only 16 days left. 

Oh! I really exciting.

>> Oh! I\'m really excited! 

So now a days, I concentrate all of my mind for preparing Europe.

>> Nowadays, I\'m focused on my preparation for my trip to Europe. 

It just 6 days left to practice English with you.

>> I only have 6 days to study English with you. 

I\'m so sorry when it comes to this thing.

>> Correct

I\'ll attend this class again when I\'ll finish my trip in coming January.

>> I\'ll attend this class again after my trip in January. 

So pleas wait me until that period.

>> Please wait for me until that day. 

I\'ll miss you!
>> Correct

Here is my homework.

>> Correct

1. to give someone a favor.

>> to do someone a favor

2. to have a bargain.

>> to make a bargain

3. to have an examination.

>> to do an examination

4. to make a complaint.

>> Correct

5. to have progress.

>> to make progress

6. to make the washing up.

>> to do the washing up

7. to make money.

>> Correct

8. to make a reservation.

>> Correct

9. to make harm to someone.

>> to do harm to someone

10. to make a decision.

>> Correct

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