Hello Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello James,
I am really so sorry to hear about that sad news. So it\'s really important for us to know how to control ourselves. It is very easy to do things that we will regret about the consequences in the end. Because when we are angry we can\'t decide properly. So before you do something or decide on something, make sure that you are no longer mad or angry. TGIF!! ^^
~~T.Tina~~
Yeah! You\'re right.
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Time flies so fast!
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I feel that Today is like Wednesday.
>>I feel like today is Wednesday.
Yesterday I was told a bad news.
>>Yesterday, I heard a bad news.
One of my juniors when I was in the army fought with his fellow soldier 3 days ago.
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So he has been waiting for punishment and his military service day may be extended if he is unfortunate.
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The most sad part of this story is his military service just finish tomorrow!
>>The most sad part of this story is his military service should be finished tomorrow!
I will call to him today to ask how about his punishment.
>>I will call him today to ask him about his punishment.
I really hope that he can be able to go out from the army tomorrow.
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Have a nice day!
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1. Is she going to take photos?
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2. Are they going to watch a DVD?
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3. Is Patrick going to answering the phone?
>>Is Patrick going to answer the phone?
4. Are you going to eat this tub of ice cream?
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5. Is Rebeca going to read comics?
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