Hello Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thank you very much for sending over your homework. Anyway, good luck with your new mobile phone. I do hope you'd get to buy the best one. I think you are already excited about your Europe trip. Keep safe and warm, dear. See you!
It\'s really happy Friday!
>> It\'s really a happy Friday!
Actually,in today class, I have a horrible headache.
>> Actually, as we were having our class today, I was having a terrible headache.
Because, our staffs was having a get-together yesterday.
>> It's because we had a staff get-together yesterday.
We have some meat,fish and drink a lot of liquor to the mid night.
>> We had a drinking session until midnight.
Even one of out staffs slept in my home and went to work place in the morning directly. ha! ha!
>> One of our staff even slept at home, and went to work directly in the morning! Hahaha
in I plane to go to buy a smartphone for my Europe trip tomorrow.
>> I am planning to buy a smart phone tomorrow for my Europe trip.
The guy whom I told to you in our homework section section have a friend who mange the phone authorized retail store.
>> The guy, whom I told to you about in our homework section, has a friend who manages a phone authorized retail store.
He allow me to give a phone with very cheap price.
>> He allowed me to buy a phone in a very cheap price.
I make my mind to buy Optimus G.
>> I think I'm buying Optimus G.
Anyway, have a nice weekend!
>> Correct.
Here is my homework.
>> Correct.
1. Does Peter live with his father?
>> Correct.
2. Do you learn Spanish?
>> Correct.
3. Do Andrew and Martin ride their bikes to school?
>> Correct.
4. Do they play in the garden?
>> Correct.
5. Does Sandy\'s hamster live in a cage?
>> Correct.
6. Do the cats sit on the wall?
>> Correct.
7. Do we work in front of the computer?
>> Correct.
8. Do you play the drum?
>> Correct.
9. Does Steve wear pullovers?
>> Correct.
10. Do I clean the bathroom?
>> Correct.
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