Hello Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
It is happy Tuesday! It is a good thing that you are okay. Thanks for interesting my Europe trip. I'm happy when I talk to my Europe trip story for somebody. Sometimes I have missed that time, like Christmas part in Paris, riding snowboard in Switzerland, meeting a lot of tourist, etc... But I am satisfying now. Studying English, meeting my friend,or working out. I think, satisfying this moment is very important thing for me and I can be positive if I satisfying everything. So I will always live over satisfying and appreciating every things. Ha! Ha! Ha!
By the way, Have a nice day!
Here is my homework.
1. That was a good lesson.
2. The dinner smells good.
3. The project's going well.
4. It sounds good to me.
5. That coat looks good on you.
6. I don't have a good feeling about this.
강사 첨삭
Hello there~~
A happy Tuesday as well!
Thanks for doing your homework! Good Job to it! Keep it up! :)
About your trip in Europe, it was nice listening to it. Thanks as well for sharing it to me.
I\'d be looking forward to more of your stories. ^^
Have a great day and see you in class!
T.Tina
It is happy Tuesday! It is a good thing that you are okay.
>>It is a happy Tuesday! CORRECT!!
Thanks for interesting my Europe trip. I\'m happy when I talk to my Europe trip story for somebody.
>>Thanks for showing interest in my trip in Europe. I\'m happy when I\'m talking about my trip in Europe to someone.
Sometimes I have missed that time, like Christmas part in Paris, riding snowboard in Switzerland, meeting a lot of tourist, etc...
>>Sometimes I missed those times when I spent Christmas in Paris, did snowboarding in Switzerland, met a lot of tourists, etc....
But I am satisfying now. Studying English, meeting my friend,or working out.
>>But I am satisfied now studying English, meeting my friends and working out.
I think, satisfying this moment is very important thing for me and I can be positive if I satisfying everything.
>>I think being satisfied at present is the most important thing for me to be positive.
So I will always live over satisfying and appreciating every things. Ha! Ha! Ha!
>>So I should always live in satisfaction and appreciate every single thing. Ha! Ha! Ha!By the way, Have a nice day!
>>CORRECT!!Here is my homework.1. That was a good lesson.
>>CORRECT!!2. The dinner smells good.
>>CORRECT!!3. The project\'s going well.
>>CORRECT!!4. It sounds good to me.
>>CORRECT!!
5. That coat looks good on you.
>>CORRECT!!
6. I don\'t have a good feeling about this.
>>CORRECT!!
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