Hello Tina!

2013-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

학생이 쓴 원문

It is happy Tuesday! It is a good thing that you are okay. Thanks for interesting my Europe trip. I'm happy when I talk to my Europe trip story for somebody. Sometimes I have missed that time, like Christmas part in Paris, riding snowboard in Switzerland, meeting a lot of tourist, etc... But I am satisfying now. Studying English, meeting my friend,or working out. I think, satisfying this moment is very important thing for me and I can be positive if I satisfying everything. So I will always live over satisfying and appreciating every things. Ha! Ha! Ha! By the way, Have a nice day! Here is my homework. 1. That was a good lesson. 2. The dinner smells good. 3. The project's going well. 4. It sounds good to me. 5. That coat looks good on you. 6. I don't have a good feeling about this.

강사 첨삭

Hello there~~ A happy Tuesday as well! Thanks for doing your homework! Good Job to it! Keep it up! :) About your trip in Europe, it was nice listening to it. Thanks as well for sharing it to me. I\'d be looking forward to more of your stories. ^^ Have a great day and see you in class! T.Tina It is happy Tuesday! It is a good thing that you are okay. >>It is a happy Tuesday! CORRECT!! Thanks for interesting my Europe trip. I\'m happy when I talk to my Europe trip story for somebody. >>Thanks for showing interest in my trip in Europe. I\'m happy when I\'m talking about my trip in Europe to someone. Sometimes I have missed that time, like Christmas part in Paris, riding snowboard in Switzerland, meeting a lot of tourist, etc... >>Sometimes I missed those times when I spent Christmas in Paris, did snowboarding in Switzerland, met a lot of tourists, etc.... But I am satisfying now. Studying English, meeting my friend,or working out. >>But I am satisfied now studying English, meeting my friends and working out. I think, satisfying this moment is very important thing for me and I can be positive if I satisfying everything. >>I think being satisfied at present is the most important thing for me to be positive. So I will always live over satisfying and appreciating every things. Ha! Ha! Ha! >>So I should always live in satisfaction and appreciate every single thing. Ha! Ha! Ha!By the way, Have a nice day! >>CORRECT!!Here is my homework.1. That was a good lesson. >>CORRECT!!2. The dinner smells good. >>CORRECT!!3. The project\'s going well. >>CORRECT!!4. It sounds good to me. >>CORRECT!! 5. That coat looks good on you. >>CORRECT!! 6. I don\'t have a good feeling about this. >>CORRECT!!

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