Hello Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello James!! ^^
Yes! Don\'t take a nap!! kkk ^^ You will have a hard time sleeping tonight. Just give it a try if it works. That is the good thing of having a smart phone, it is very convenient for you to check your mails. ^^ Don\'t over tire yourself, have some time to relax for you to enjoy studying!! ^^
See you later!!
~~~T.Tina~~~
Hello Tina.
>> Hello Tina,
I\'m in labrary now.
>> I\'m at the library now.
Actually I wanted to have some nab when I finished my lunch.
>>
Actually I wanted to take a nap when I finished my lunch.
But I was worried that I am going to sleep longer than I expected.
>> Correct.
So I made my mind to go library.
>>
So I made up my mind to go to the library.
>> So I decided to go to the library.
If I wanted to sleep throughout studying English I can have a little time for a sleep without worring about deep sleep. Ho Ho Ho.
>> I want to sleep all throughout because I have little time to sleep.
I am writing this homework with my smartphone now.
>> Correct
So It is a little hard to write.
>> Correct.
:( As long as I will countinue studying.
>> I will continue my English studies.
Have a nice day!
>> Correct.
Here is my homework.
>> Correct.
1. He quickly reads a book.
>> Correct.
2. Mandy is a pretty girl.
>> Correct.
3. The class is terribly loud today.
>> Correct.
4. Max is a good singer.
>> Correct.
5. You can easily opean this tin.
>> Correct.
6. It is a terrible day today.
>> Correct.
7. She sings the song well.
>> Correct.
8. He is a careful driver.
>> Correct.
9. He drives the car carefully.
>> Correct.
10. The dog barks loudly.
>> Correct.
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