Hello Tina!

2013-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello Tina. I'm in labrary now. Actually I wanted to have some nab when I finished my lunch. But I was worried that I am going to sleep longer than I expected. So I made my mind to go library. If I wanted to sleep throughout studying English I can have a little time for a sleep without worring about deep sleep. Ho Ho Ho. I am writing this homework with my smartphone now. So It is a little hard to write. :( As long as I will countinue studying. Have a nice day! Here is my homework. 1. He quickly reads a book. 2. Mandy is a pretty girl. 3. The class is terribly loud today. 4. Max is a good singer. 5. You can easily opean this tin. 6. It is a terrible day today. 7. She sings the song well. 8. He is a careful driver. 9. He drives the car carefully. 10. The dog barks loudly.

강사 첨삭

Hello James!! ^^ 

Yes! Don\'t take a nap!! kkk ^^ You will have a hard time sleeping tonight. Just give it a try if it works. That is the good thing of having a smart phone, it is very convenient for you to check your mails. ^^ Don\'t over tire yourself, have some time to relax for you to enjoy studying!! ^^ 

See you later!! 

~~~T.Tina~~~

Hello Tina. 

>> Hello Tina, 

I\'m in labrary now.

>> I\'m at the library now.

Actually I wanted to have some nab when I finished my lunch.

>> Actually I wanted to take a nap when I finished my lunch.

But I was worried that I am going to sleep longer than I expected.

>> Correct.

So I made my mind to go library.

>>  So I made up my mind to go to the library.

>> So I decided to go to the library.

If I wanted to sleep throughout studying English I can have a little time for a sleep without worring about deep sleep. Ho Ho Ho.

>> I want to sleep all throughout because I have little time to sleep.

I am writing this homework with my smartphone now.

>> Correct

So It is a little hard to write.

>> Correct.

:( As long as I will countinue studying.

>> I will continue my English studies.

Have a nice day!

>> Correct.

 Here is my homework.

>> Correct.

1. He quickly reads a book.

>> Correct.

2. Mandy is a pretty girl.

>> Correct.

3. The class is terribly loud today.

>> Correct.

4. Max is a good singer.

>> Correct.

5. You can easily opean this tin.

>> Correct.

6. It is a terrible day today.

>> Correct.

 7. She sings the song well.

>> Correct.

8. He is a careful driver.

>> Correct.

9. He drives the car carefully.

>> Correct.

10. The dog barks loudly.

>> Correct.

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