Hello Tina!

2013-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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It is a happy Thursday! As I had a time for sleep and just woke up, I can feel refreshment. I will able to more concentrate my study! Thank you for compliment to me. I have another reason that I agreed with mother's opinion. I want to become independent from my home. I have always wanted to become independent from home since I was in high school. So I used to live apart from my family for about one year when I was first grade of university. I could live more diligently and more funny on my own. And sometimes I could live with my friend and I could do my project with my friends in my room all night long. It was very happy to me. May be I have intense free spirit. kkk Here is my homework. 1. old-older-oldest. 2. bad-worse-worst. 3. difficult-more difficult-most difficult. 4. large-larger-largest. 5. good-better-best. 6. big-bigger-biggest. 7. easy-easier-easiest. 8. much-more-most. 9. little-less-least. 10. interesting-more interesting-most interesting.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!! Thanks for doing this homework! You know it is good to be independent but sometimes we still need others for us to be complete. We just need to find the balance of the two in order to live happily! Have a great day and see you in class! PS.Please check the corrections I made for you. ^^ T.Tina It is a happy Thursday! As I had a time for sleep and just woke up, I can feel refreshment. I will able to more concentrate my study! >>CORRECT!! I just woke up as I had time to sleep and now I feel refreshed. I will be able to concentrate more on my studies!Thank you for compliment to me. I have another reason that I agreed with mother\'s opinion. I want to become independent from my home. >>Thank you for complimenting me. I have another reason why I agreed to my mother\'s opinion. I want to be independent.  I have always wanted to become independent from home since I was in high school. >>I always wanted to become independent since I was in High School. So I used to live apart from my family for about one year when I was first grade of university. >>So I used to live apart from my family for about a year when I was a freshman in the university. I could live more diligently and more funny on my own. >>I could live more diligently and funnier on my own. And sometimes I could live with my friend and I could do my project with my friends in my room all night long. >>CORRECT!!  It was very happy to me. May be I have intense free spirit. kkk >>I was very happy then. Maybe I am a free spirited person.kkkHere is my homework. >>CORRECT!! 1. old-older-oldest. >>CORRECT!!2. bad-worse-worst. >>CORRECT!!3. difficult-more difficult-most difficult. >>CORRECT!!4. large-larger-largest. >>CORRECT!!5. good-better-best. >>CORRECT!! 6. big-bigger-biggest. >>CORRECT!!7. easy-easier-easiest. >>CORRECT!!8. much-more-most. >>CORRECT!!9. little-less-least. >>CORRECT!!10. interesting-more interesting-most interesting. >>CORRECT!!    

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