Hello Tina!

2013-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

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It's a nice Wednesday! It's good thing that I could register all of the classes that I have to attend even if I will be separated from my friends. But It was worthwhile to go through hard from morning. When I was fresh man, I took a English conversation class. I enjoyed it and try to get a high score. However, I got a 'C+' at this class. May be I had a wrong method of study. For now I feel like that I will be get a higher score than past. It's thank to you. For making a return for your favor, I will must get a 'A+' at this class! kkkk Have a nice day! Here is my homework. 1. Did you close the door? 2. Did Claire finish the housework? 3. Did he have a bath yesterday? 4. Did the boy jump into the lake? 5. Did Ronald visit the Tower of London? 6. Did Peggy and Olivia look after the baby? 7. Did she make the invitation cards herself? 8. Did the girl drop the ketchup bottle? 9. Did Tim buy the green T-shirt last Monday? 10. Did they practice karate this morning?

강사 첨삭

Hello there~~

A happy Wednesday!!!

Thanks for doing your homework~~ Good Job!

I am pleased to know that you\'re appreciating our class~~ Keep that positive attitude you have towards English

and you\'ll be rewarded in no time! ;) Keep studying hard~~

Please check the corrections I made for you...

Have a nice day and see you in class~~

T.Tina

It\'s a nice Wednesday! It\'s good thing that I could register all of the classes that I have to attend even if I will be separated from my friends.

>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!! But you should say, it\'s a good thing.......

But It was worthwhile to go through hard from morning.

>>But it was worthwhile going through hard times in the morning.
When I was fresh man, I took a English conversation class. I enjoyed it and try to get a high score.

>>When I was a freshman, I took an English conversation class.CORRECT!!

However, I got a \'C+\' at this class. May be I had a wrong method of study.

>>However, I got a C+ in that class. Maybe I had a wrong method of studying.

For now I feel like that I will be get a higher score than past. It\'s thank to you.

>>Right now I feel like I am able to get a higher score than the past. It\'s all thanks to you.

For making a return for your favor, I will must get a \'A+\' at this class! kkkk Have a nice day!

>>To make it up to you, I must get an A+ in that class! kkk CORRECT!!
Here is my homework.

>>CORRECT!!
1. Did you close the door?

>>CORRECT!!
2. Did Claire finish the housework?

>>CORRECT!!
3. Did he have a bath yesterday?

>>CORRECT!!
4. Did the boy jump into the lake?

>>CORRECT!!
5. Did Ronald visit the Tower of London?

>>CORRECT!!
6. Did Peggy and Olivia look after the baby?

>>CORRECT!!
7. Did she make the invitation cards herself?

>>CORRECT!!
8. Did the girl drop the ketchup bottle?

>>CORRECT!!
9. Did Tim buy the green T-shirt last Monday?

>>CORRECT!!
10. Did they practice karate this morning?

>>CORRECT!!

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