Hello Tina!

2013-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

It's a nice Monday again! I always start a week over preparing the class and I can feel that how my English skill was improved during last week. It feel great about improving English ability and it can be motivation that I can do lively. Also your comMendation too. Kkk Last Saturday I made a the south Africa friend at English church. Thanks to practice hard in our class I could talk with her without big problems. I feel that I will be make more and more international friend including you :) kkk Anyway have a nice day! See you tomorrow. Here is my homework. 1. They were not I'll. 2. You were not tired. 3. The children were not quite. 4. Max was not in Helsinki last week. 5. She was not home for dinner. 6. The water was not cold. 7. There was not a good film on TV yesterday. 8. We were not in Brazil last winters. 9. Betty and Florence were not at school this morning. 10. I was not happy when I heard about the accident.

강사 첨삭

Hello there~~

A happy Monday!!

I am so pleased reading this composition of yours because I got to know that you appreciate our class! :) Thanks! ^^

Anyway, please check your spellings all the time...^^

Have a great day and see you in class tomorrow~~

T.Tina

It\'s a nice Monday again! I always start a week over preparing the class and I can feel that how my English skill was improved during last week.

>>CORRECT!! I always start the week preparing for the class and I could feel how much my English skill was improved last weekend.

It feel great about improving English ability and it can be motivation that I can do lively. Also your comMendation too. Kkk

>>I feel great about improving my English ability and it is my motivation to be livelier in class. I also appreciate your commendation too. kkk
Last Saturday I made a the south Africa friend at English church. Thanks to practice hard in our class I could talk with her without big problems.

>>Last Saturday, I made friends with a South African at the English church. Thanks to our intense practice in class, I was able to talk with her without any big problem.

I feel that I will be make more and more international friend including you :) kkk

>>I could feel that I would be able to make more foreign friends including you :) kkk
Anyway have a nice day! See you tomorrow.

>>CORRECT!!
Here is my homework.

>>CORRECT!!
1. They were not I\'ll.

>>They were not ill.
2. You were not tired.

>>CORRECT!!
3. The children were not quite.

>>CORRECT!!
4. Max was not in Helsinki last week.

>>CORRECT!!
5. She was not home for dinner.

>>CORRECT!!
6. The water was not cold.

>>CORRECT!!
7. There was not a good film on TV yesterday.

>>CORRECT!!
8. We were not in Brazil last winters.

>>We were not in Brazil last Winter.
9. Betty and Florence were not at school this morning.

>>CORRECT!!
10. I was not happy when I heard about the accident.

>>CORRECT!!

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