Hello Tina!

2013-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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Good afternoon Tina! Hum....who is Kim? Is it me? hahaha. Anyway Toeic speaking test is coming. It will be held on February 22th. But It is still too hard to speak well on the test. Answering a question immediately within limited time request hard training if I can speak well on the test. May be I spend more time to practice Toeic speaking. ㅠㅠ Oh! It's a already lunch! I will have some lunch and continue to practice Toeic speaking.:) Have a nice day! See you! Here is my homework. 1. Could you lend me some money, please? 2. Some pupils can borrow books from their school. 3. Will you lend me your umbrella till tomorrow? 4. Should I lend him my football? 5. You may borrow my bike, but be careful. 6. Could I borrow your cup? 7. You can lend your book to Steve. 8. Why do students borrow so much money from their parents? 9. Peter won't lend his car to anyone. 10. Will your mother lend you some money?

강사 첨삭

Hello!

Yes, I addressed you as \"Kim\" today.^^kkk....

I am merely thinking about a lot of names today.

Does it sound good, or what?^^

Anyway, I hope that you will do good in your test.

Let us do our best in our classes so that you will get a high rating, okay?

Also, continue practicing...

I am so proud of you Kim! hahaha^^

How do you want me to call you instead?

Maybe we can make this as one of our topics in class: \"making and giving names\".

Enjoy your lunch and I\'ll enjoy mine as well.

Take care!

_T.Tina^^

P.S.

You did good in your homework!^^

Good afternoon Tina! Hum....who is Kim? Is it me? hahaha.

>>Correct!
Anyway Toeic speaking test is coming.

>>Correct!

OR >> My TOEIC speaking test is just around the corner.

It will be held on February 22th.

>>Correct!

But It is still too hard to speak well on the test.

>>Correct!

Answering a question immediately within limited time request hard training if I can speak well on the test.

>>Answering a question immediately within a limited time request is a hard training if I want to do well in the test.

May be I spend more time to practice Toeic speaking. ㅠㅠ

>>Maybe I should spend more time to practice TOEIC speaking.^^

Oh! It\'s a already lunch!

>>Oh, it\'s already lunch!

I will have some lunch and continue to practice Toeic speaking.:) Have a nice day! See you!
>>Correct!
Here is my homework.
>>Correct!
1. Could you lend me some money, please?

>>Correct!
2. Some pupils can borrow books from their school.
>>Correct!

3. Will you lend me your umbrella till tomorrow?

>>Correct!
4. Should I lend him my football?

>>Correct!
5. You may borrow my bike, but be careful.

>>Correct!
6. Could I borrow your cup?

>>Correct!
7. You can lend your book to Steve.

>>Correct!
8. Why do students borrow so much money from their parents?

>>Correct!
9. Peter won\'t lend his car to anyone.

>>Correct!
10. Will your mother lend you some money?

>>Correct!

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