Hello Tina!

2013-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Happy Friday! I really wish that weekend comes fastly. This week, I spend most of my time for English. I did not do anything except practicing anything when I try to remember this week event. I will take a rest and take time off from English. Ha!Ha!Ha! Oh..... However I will have to go to the English church. ㅡㅡ. It's okay. Going to English church is fun for me. I am planing to watch English movie without translation in this weekend. It will be good to check how I can understand English before past. Anyway have a nice weekend! See you Monday, Here is my homework. 1. Jack has fun at the party last Saturday. 2. I'm sorry! But I have to go now. 3. Have you ever been to Canada? 4. Daiv has passed his driving test. 5. Can we have the bill, please? 6. The match had already started when arrived. 7. They had breakfast at 6:30 this morning. 8. Do you have a brother? 9. My boss never has time. 10. Doris has been waiting For Parm for 20 minutes now.

강사 첨삭

Hello there~~

A SPECTACULAR FRIDAY!!

Thanks for doing your homework! :) Please check the corrections I made in it.

By the way, watching an English movie would be great to improve more and to check whether you\'ve gone better! :)

Try it and let me know of the result later..kkk ^_______^

Have a nice weekend!

T.Tina

Happy Friday! I really wish that weekend comes fastly. This week, I spend most of my time for English.

>>CORRECT!! I really wish that weekend would come fast. This week, I spent moat of my time for English.

I did not do anything except practicing anything when I try to remember this week event. I will take a rest and take time off from English. Ha!Ha!Ha!

>>I didn\'t do anything but to practice trying to remember the events this week.  CORRECT!!

Oh..... However I will have to go to the English church. ㅡㅡ. It\'s okay. Going to English church is fun for me.

>>Oh....However, I have to go to the English church. CORRECT!!

I am planing to watch English movie without translation in this weekend. It will be good to check how I can understand English before past.

>>I am planning to watch an English movie without subtitle this weekend. It will be good to check how much I can understand in English as compared before.

Anyway have a nice weekend! See you Monday,

>>CORRECT!!
Here is my homework.

>>CORRECT!!
1. Jack has fun at the party last Saturday.

>>Jack had fun at the party last night.
2. I\'m sorry! But I have to go now.

>>I\'m sorry, but I have to go now.
3. Have you ever been to Canada?

>>CORRECT!!
4. Daiv has passed his driving test.

>>CORRECT!! Please check the spelling of Dave
5. Can we have the bill, please?

>>CORRECT!!
6. The match had already started when arrived.

>>The match has already started when we arrived.
7. They had breakfast at 6:30 this morning.

>>CORRECT!!
8. Do you have a brother?

>>CORRECT!!
9. My boss never has time.

>>CORRECT!!
10. Doris has been waiting For Parm for 20 minutes now.

>>CORRECT!! Please check the name, it should be Pam

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