Hello Tina!
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강사 첨삭
Hello there~~
a pleasant afternoon!!!
It enjoyed reading your story about watching movies...kkk
Anyway, thanks for doing your homework! Don\'t give up. As they say, keep trying until you succeed.
Have a great day today and see you in class~~~
T.Tina-
Good afternoon! Last Sunday,following your advice,I watched movie named \'the PURSUIT of HAPPYNESS\' without subtitle.
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It was not too hard to understand a story. But the time passed, I felt gradually stuffy and uncomfortable.
>>It was not too hard to understand the story. But as the time passed, I gradually felt stuffy and uncomfortable.
Finally I totally couldn\'t understand what the story said. So I watched the movie again with subtitle.
>>Finally, I totally couldn\'t understand what the story was all about. CORRECT!!
I think it is too early to understand story of movie with out subtitle. hahahaha
>>I think it is too easy to understand the story of the movie with a subtitle. hahaha
But I am planing to watch movie every weekend without subtitle. Ann then, someday I would be able to understand right? :) Have a nice day!
>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
Here is my home work.
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1. Do you believe in life after dead?
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2. Three lives were lost in the fire.
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3. Do you like to live in the North?
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4. Have you bought the DVD with the live recording of the U2 concert?
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5. Where do you live?
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6. Peter still lives with his parents.
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7. Have you ever seen a real live scorpion?
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8. My father\'s words have lived with me all my life.
>>CORRECT!!
9. Who live in the city center?
>>Who lives in the city center?
10. My great-grandfather lost his life in World War II.
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