Hello Tina!

2013-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

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Good afternoon! Last Sunday,following your advice,I watched movie named 'the PURSUIT of HAPPYNESS' without subtitle. It was not too hard to understand a story. But the time passed, I felt gradually stuffy and uncomfortable. Finally I totally couldn't understand what the story said. So I watched the movie again with subtitle. I think it is too early to understand story of movie with out subtitle. hahahaha But I am planing to watch movie every weekend without subtitle. Ann then, someday I would be able to understand right? :) Have a nice day! Here is my home work. 1. Do you believe in life after dead? 2. Three lives were lost in the fire. 3. Do you like to live in the North? 4. Have you bought the DVD with the live recording of the U2 concert? 5. Where do you live? 6. Peter still lives with his parents. 7. Have you ever seen a real live scorpion? 8. My father's words have lived with me all my life. 9. Who live in the city center? 10. My great-grandfather lost his life in World War II.

강사 첨삭

Hello there~~

a pleasant afternoon!!!

It enjoyed reading your story about watching movies...kkk

Anyway, thanks for doing your homework! Don\'t give up. As they say, keep trying until you succeed.

Have a great day today and see you in class~~~

T.Tina-


Good afternoon! Last Sunday,following your advice,I watched movie named \'the PURSUIT of HAPPYNESS\' without subtitle.

>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!! 

It was not too hard to understand a story. But the time passed, I felt gradually stuffy and uncomfortable.

>>It was not too hard to understand the story. But as the time passed, I gradually felt stuffy and uncomfortable.

Finally I totally couldn\'t understand what the story said. So I watched the movie again with subtitle.

>>Finally, I totally couldn\'t understand what the story was all about. CORRECT!!

I think it is too early to understand story of movie with out subtitle. hahahaha

>>I think it is too easy to understand the story of the movie with a subtitle. hahaha

But I am planing to watch movie every weekend without subtitle. Ann then, someday I would be able to understand right? :) Have a nice day!

>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
Here is my home work.

>>CORRECT!!
1. Do you believe in life after dead?

>>CORRECT!!
2. Three lives were lost in the fire.

>>CORRECT!!
3. Do you like to live in the North?

>>CORRECT!!
4. Have you bought the DVD with the live recording of the U2 concert?

>>CORRECT!!

5. Where do you live?

>>CORRECT!!
6. Peter still lives with his parents.

>>CORRECT!!
7. Have you ever seen a real live scorpion?

>>CORRECT!!
8. My father\'s words have lived with me all my life.

>>CORRECT!!
9. Who live in the city center?

>>Who lives in the city center?
10. My great-grandfather lost his life in World War II.

>>CORRECT!!

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