Hello Tina!

2013-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

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Good afternoon! I read your question and understood. But,actually I don't know how did I answer this question... Of course I aware about things that are happening around me. But nowadays any big event did not happen around me. And if the any event happened around me, is it right I answer 'yes'? And explain about the event? I hope it is right:). Could you give me the model answer? If I ask a this question to you? I wait for this. Thank you! and Have a nice day! Here is my home work. 1. Could you tell me the way to station, please? 2. He didn't say the word. 3. She told her name was Sue. 4. Let me tell you something about my hobbies. 5. Forget everything I just said. 6. Why didn't you tell him that before? 7. Why didn't you said that before? 8. They told nothing to me. 9. You don't need to tell us that. 10. What did Eric said when he saw the new bike?

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon James!! ^^ 

I did not notice that we had our last class this morning. I am happy you re-enrolled!! ^^  Yeah! I asked you this question \"Are you aware about what is going on around you or what is happening around you? Okay, it is safe to just say Yes, but I want you to expound your answer. You can say, \"Yes, I am aware what is going on around me. It is important for me to be aware so I know how to respond accordingly. I know the things that I must do and follow. I have to be aware as well with the different events to occur in order for me to prepare ahead of time on how to observe the holiday or the event. Awareness is very important! \" Or you can answer in anyway you want to as long as it has something to do with being aware around you. :) 

See you tomorrow in class James!! ^^ Please always remind me about the things that you want us to discuss during our class. I have the tendency to forget things. :) Keep it up!!! 

~~~T.Tina~~~

Good afternoon! I read your question and understood.

>> Good afternoon! I read your question and I understood it.

But,actually I don\'t know how did I answer this question...

>> But, actually, I don\'t know how to answer it.

Of course I aware about things that are happening around me.

>>  Of course I\'m aware of the things that are happening around me.

But nowadays any big event did not happen around me.

>> But nowadays, there are no big events that happen around me.

And if the any event happened around me, is it right I answer \'yes\'?

>> And if there is any event around me, I\'d answer yes.

And explain about the event? I hope it is right:).

>> And I\'d tell you more about it.

Could you give me the model answer?

>> Could you give me an example answer.

If I ask a this question to you?

>>Correct.

I wait for this.

>> I\'ll wait for it.

Thank you! and Have a nice day!

>>Correct.
Here is my home work.
>>Correct.
1. Could you tell me the way to station, please?
>> Can you tell me the way to the station, please?
2. He didn\'t say the word.
>> He didn\'t say a word.
3. She told her name was Sue.
>> She said her name was Sue.

4. Let me tell you something about my hobbies.

>>Correct.

 5. Forget everything I just said.

>>Correct.

6. Why didn\'t you tell him that before?

>>Correct.

7. Why didn\'t you said that before?

>> Why didn\'t you say that before?

8. They told nothing to me.

>> They said nothing to me.

9. You don\'t need to tell us that.

>>Correct.

10. What did Eric said when he saw the new bike?

>>Correct.

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