Hello Tina!

2013-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Long time no see! I hope that you had such a great holiday with your family. Thank you for answering my question. I am always concerned about my pronunciation. When I heard recorded my pronciation I feels that it is so weird and I think what I am talking about?! So on last weekend I tried to improve my pronunciation. After that I felt It is useful not only conversation but also reading and TOEIC speaking test. So I would like to improve my pronunciation with you. Anyway thank you for giving a tip for me. Have a nice day! See you! Here is my homework. 1. Is Henry going to fly a kite? 2. Are we not going to buy sweets? 3. Is she going to tell a joke? 4. Are the boys not going to check the computer? 5. Is the teacher not going to use a pencil? 6. Are you going to water the flowers? 7. Is my brother not going to wake up at 6 o'clock? 8. Am I not going to wear a T-shirt to night? 9. Is Jeremy going to make breakfast? 10. Are you not going to catch a lot of fish in that lake?

강사 첨삭

Hello there! It\'s good to hear from you again. I hope that you had a great holiday. Anyway, I can feel your passion to improve your English skills. Don\'t worry, I\'m here to help you. 

---Teacher Tina----

Long time no see!

>> Correct.

I hope that you had such a great holiday with your family.

>> Correct.

Thank you for answering my question.

>> Correct.

I am always concerned about my pronunciation.

>> I am concerned about my pronunciation.

When I heard recorded my pronciation I feels that it is so weird and I think what I am talking about?!

>> When I listen to the recordings, I feel that it sounds weird, the way that I talk.

So on last weekend I tried to improve my pronunciation.

>>  So last weekend I tried to improve my pronunciation.

After that I felt It is useful not only conversation but also reading and TOEIC speaking test.

>> After that, I felt that conversation is not the only important in improving my skills but also reading and TOEIC speaking test.

So I would like to improve my pronunciation with you.

>> Correct.

Anyway thank you for giving a tip for me.

>> Anyway, thank you for giving me a tip.

Have a nice day! See you!

>> Correct.

Here is my homework.

1. Is Henry going to fly a kite?

>>  Henry is going to fly a kite.

2. Are we not going to buy sweets?

>>  We are not going to buy sweets.

3. Is she going to tell a joke?

>> Correct.

4. Are the boys not going to check the computer?

>>  Aren\'t the boys going to check the computer?

5. Is the teacher not going to use a pencil?

>>  The teacher is not going to use a pencil.

6. Are you going to water the flowers?

>> Correct.

7. Is my brother not going to wake up at 6 o\'clock?

>> My brother is not going to wake up at 6 o\'clock. 

8. Am I not going to wear a T-shirt to night?

>> I am not going to wear a T-shirt tonight.

9. Is Jeremy going to make breakfast?

>> Correct.

10. Are you not going to catch a lot of fish in that lake?

>>  You are not going to catch a lot of fish in that lake.


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