Hello Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there~~
A pleasant afternoon!!
Thanks for doing your homework! Also, thanks for acknowledging the suggestion I made for you. :)
Practice even more and you\'ll be better.
Have a nice day and see you in class~~
T.Tina
Yeah! I think it is good idea that you told me in our class. I always make a sentence to use in TOEIC speaking.
>>Yeah, I think what you told me in our class is a good idea. I should always make sentences that I can use in TOEIC speaking,
However I have no way to know that it is correct answer. So I want you to modify my sentence.
>>However I have no way to know whether that is correct or not so I want you to modify my sentences.
most of all they can get some useful help from networking.
>>Most of all they can get some useful help from networking.
For example, when I first got into university,I totally didn\'t know how to spend my time and how to study in university.
>>For example, when I first got into the university,I totally didn\'t know how to spend my time and how to study in it.
Then I had a superior, he gave me a lot of help. He taught me how to register club, how to study and so on.
>>Then I had a senior, he gave me a lot of help. He taught me how to register in clubs, how to study and so on.
Thanks to him I could spend a happy time in my university and could get a high score on my subject.
>>Thanks to him I could spend a happy time in my university and could get a high score on my subjects.
Then I felt how networking is important. (networking means personal connection, right?)
>>Then I felt how important networking is. (networking means personal connection, right?)
Here is my homework.
>>CORRECT!!
1. Flies
>>CORRECT!!
2. Oxen
>>CORRECT!!
3. Spies
>>CORRECT!!
4. Selves
>>CORRECT!!
5. Stories
>>CORRECT!!
6. Offices
>>CORRECT!!
7. Logos
>>CORRECT!!
8. Bushes
>>CORRECT!!
9. Noses
>>CORRECT!!
10. Lions
>>CORRECT!!
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