Hello Tina!

2013-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Good afternoon! Due to the test I feel time go by slowly than other weekdays. I hope that the test would finish fastly.ㅠ This is my curious sentence. 'when I saw the 3D movie first every thing seemed like alive and stick out from the screen. Nowadays, many important educational institute are concentrated in big cities. If parents want to grow their children in better environment, it would rather grow them in big cities than rural area. Also there are many facilities such as art galary, museum, gym and so on. So many children can experience many kind of things. Experiencing many kind of things is important in young age. Have a great day! Here is my homework 1. X 2. The 3. X 4. The 5. X 6. X 7. The 8. The 9. The 10. X Actually I don't know exactly when I should use The.

강사 첨삭

Hello there~~

A pleasant afternoon! Thanks for doing your homework!

About your question regarding the use of the article \"the\" kindly ask that to me during in class

so that I would be able to explain it better to you. Thanks!

Please check the corrections I made for you~~

Have a nice day and see you!

T.Tina

Good afternoon! Due to the test I feel time go by slowly than other weekdays. I hope that the test would finish fastly.ㅠ

>>CORRECT!! Due to the test I feel like time goes by slowly compared to the other weekdays. I hope that the test would finish fast.ㅠ
This is my curious sentence. \'when I saw the 3D movie first every thing seemed like alive and stick out from the screen.

>>I am curious about this sentence. \"When I saw a movie in 3D for the first time, everything seemed alive and would come out of the screen\".
Nowadays, many important educational institute are concentrated in big cities.

>>Nowadays, many important educational institutes are concentrated in big cities.

If parents want to grow their children in better environment, it would rather grow them in big cities than rural area.

>>If parents want to raise their children in a better environment, they would rather raise them in big cities than rural areas.

Also there are many facilities such as art galary, museum, gym and so on. So many children can experience many kind of things.

>>Also there are many facilities such as art gallery, museum, gym and so on. So many children can experience many kinds of things.

Experiencing many kind of things is important in young age.

>>Experiencing many kinds of things is important in young age.
Have a great day!

>>CORRECT!!
Here is my homework

>>CORRECT!!
1. X

>>CORRECT!!
2. The

>>CORRECT!!
3. X

>>CORRECT!!
4. The

>>CORRECT!!
5. X

>>CORRECT!!
6. X

>>CORRECT!!
7. The

>>CORRECT!!
8.The

>>X
9. The

>>CORRECT!!
10. X

>>CORRECT!!
Actually I don\'t know exactly when I should use The.

>>CORRECT!!

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