Hello Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon! Well, you got good points here.
Also, you did good in your homework. Keep it up~
_T.Tina^^
Good morning! Thank you for your good lecture. I always appreciate your commendation.
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Just two more days we can take a rest so let us cheer up togather!
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I\'m curious this sentence.
>>I\'m curious about thins sentence:
Nowadays technology has advanced so far.
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When it comes to business, creative and innovation is very important factors.
>>When it comes to business, creativity and innovativeness are very important.
We can realize when we see the Apple. I think young people are more creative and passionate.
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If I work with young people, I can work actively and make some innovative items.
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However old ones are important too, I should have a balance between them.
Have a nice day! And enjoy your lunch!
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Here is my homework.
1. Done
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2. Doesn\'t
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3. Do
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4. Don\'t
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5. Did
>>does
6. Didin\'t
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7. Done
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8. Didn\'t
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9. Did
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10. Done
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