Hello Tina!

2013-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning! Thank you for your good lecture. I always appreciate your commendation. Just two more days we can take a rest so let us cheer up togather! I'm curious this sentence. Nowadays technology has advanced so far. When it comes to business, creative and innovation is very important factors. We can realize when we see the Apple. I think young people are more creative and passionate. If I work with young people, I can work activelyand make some innovative items. However old ones are important too, I should have a balance between them. Have a nice day! And enjoy your lunch! Here is my homework. 1. Done 2. Doesn't 3. Do 4. Don't 5. Did 6. Didin't 7. Done 8. Didn't 9. Did 10. Done

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon! Well, you got good points here.

Also, you did good in your homework. Keep it up~

_T.Tina^^

Good morning! Thank you for your good lecture. I always appreciate your commendation.

>>Correct!

Just two more days we can take a rest so let us cheer up togather!

>>Correct!
I\'m curious this sentence.

>>I\'m curious about thins sentence:

Nowadays technology has advanced so far.

>>Correct!

When it comes to business, creative and innovation is very important factors.

>>When it comes to business, creativity and innovativeness are very important.

We can realize when we see the Apple. I think young people are more creative and passionate.

>>Correct!

If I work with young people, I can work actively and make some innovative items.

>>Correct!

However old ones are important too, I should have a balance between them.
Have a nice day! And enjoy your lunch!
>>Correct!
Here is my homework.
1. Done

>>Correct!
2. Doesn\'t

>>Correct!
3. Do

>>Correct!
4. Don\'t

>>Correct!
5. Did

>>does
6. Didin\'t

>>Correct!
7. Done

>>Correct!
8. Didn\'t

>>Correct!
9. Did

>>Correct!
10. Done

>>Correct!

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