Hello Tina!

2013-02-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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It's a good Thursday! I really enjoyed my class, it's very fun and useful for my English skill. If I continue this class for a long time, I believe someday I would be able to speak English as same as Korean. Thank you for your lecture! I'm curious this sentenc: which is a correct sentence? 'why should I not use this?' or 'Why shouldn't I use this?' The reason that many people pursue the luxurious life is they are too conscious about the way other people look at them. No matter how luxurious you are, people don' have a big interest in you. ' I think only after feeling for my self, will I really know what is's all about.' in this sentence, why I should use WILL in front of I not 'I will really know...'? Have a nice day! Here is my homework. 1. Mammoths were a big animals, bigger than elephants. 2. Mammoths did not live 100 years ago. 3. Mammoths lived a long time ago. 4. Mammoths did not eat meat. They ate grass. 5. They had two large tusks about three meters long. 6. Some dinosaurs filed in the air and some swum in the sea. 7. He drunk some milk. He didn't drink any water.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon! You got a perfect score today! Two thumbs up for you. Anyway, thank you for your never ending passion for English. Anyway, for your questions, we can discuss the answers  during the class. So, enjoy for now and we\'ll see each other again tomorrow. Take care!

-Teacher Tina-

It\'s a good Thursday! I really enjoyed my class, it\'s very fun and useful for my English skill.

>> Correct.

If I continue this class for a long time, I believe someday I would be able to speak English as same as Korean.

>>  If I continue this class for a long time, I believe that someday I would be able to speak English like other Koreans.

Thank you for your lecture!

>> Correct.

I\'m curious this sentenc: which is a correct sentence?

>>  I\'m curious about this sentence: which is a correct sentence?

\'why should I not use this?\' or \'Why shouldn\'t I use this?\'

>> Correct.

The reason that many people pursue the luxurious life is they are too conscious about the way other people look at them.

>> The reason why many people pursue/live the luxurious life is because they are too conscious about the way other people look at them.

No matter how luxurious you are, people don\' have a big interest in you.

>> Correct.

\' I think only after feeling for my self, will I really know what is\'s all about.\'

>> I thought about it and what i also want in life.

*** Sorry but I\'m not sure if I got the correct interpretation of your last statement.

in this sentence, why I should use WILL in front of I not \'I will really know...\'?

>> In this sentence, why do I use WILL after the subject.

Have a nice day!
>> Correct.
Here is my homework.
>> Correct.

1. Mammoths were a big animals, bigger than elephants.

>> Correct.

2. Mammoths did not live 100 years ago.

>> Correct.

3. Mammoths lived a long time ago.

>> Correct.

 4. Mammoths did not eat meat. They ate grass.

>> Correct.

5. They had two large tusks about three meters long.

>> Correct.

6. Some dinosaurs filed in the air and some swum in the sea.

>> Correct.

7. He drunk some milk. He didn\'t drink any water.

>> Correct.

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