Hello Tina!

2013-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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It's a nice Friday. Finally I will be able to take a rest after finishing my test. Thank you for making an effort for me in whole week days. I hope that some topic that I already prepare will come out to test.:) I'm curious about this sentence: One man is leaning at the structur with his arms crossed. Most of all famous brand products have higher quality and stylish than homemade. It's really hard for me to get those kinds of items. If I receive those kinds of items, I would be really happy even I feel like having confidence. To be honest, I expect that most people have a same idea like me. Have a nice weekend! See you Monday! Here is my homework. 1. I like the blue T-shirt over there better than the red one. 2. Their car does 150 miles an hour. 3. Where's the USB drive I lent you last week? 4. Do you still live in the Bristol? 5. Is your mother working in the old office building? 6. Carole's father works as an electrician. 7. The tomatoes are 99 pence a kilo. 8. What do you usually have for breakfast? 9. Ben has terrible headache. 10. After this tour you have an whole afternoon free to explore the city.

강사 첨삭

Hello there~~ A pleasant afternoon!! Thanks for doing your homework! Kindly check the corrections I have done for you! ;) Keep your fingers crossed for the test! :) Have a nice weekend ahead of you! T.Tina It\'s a nice Friday. Finally I will be able to take a rest after finishing my test. >>CORRECT!! CORRECT!! Thank you for making an effort for me in whole week days. I hope that some topic that I already prepare will come out to test.:) >>Thank you for all your efforts for the whole week. I hope that some of the topics that I have prepared will come out in the test. :)I\'m curious about this sentence: One man is leaning at the structur with his arms crossed. >>I\'m curious about this sentence: One man is leaning at the structure with his arms crossed. (CORRECT!! just check the spelling) Most of all famous brand products have higher quality and stylish than homemade. It\'s really hard for me to get those kinds of items. >>Most of the famous brands of products have higher quality and more stylish than the homemade ones. It\'s really hard for me to get those kinds of items.  If I receive those kinds of items, I would be really happy even I feel like having confidence. >> If I receive those kinds of items, I would be really happy I would even feel like having confidence. To be honest, I expect that most people have a same idea like me. >>To be honest, I expect that most people have the same idea with me.Have a nice weekend! See you Monday! >>CORRECT!!Here is my homework. >>CORRECT!!1. I like the blue T-shirt over there better than the red one. >>CORRECT!! 2.Their car does 150 miles an hour. >>CORRECT!! 3. Where\'s the USB drive I lent you last week? >>CORRECT!!4. Do you still live in the Bristol? >>X5. Is your mother working in the old office building? >>Is your mother working in an old office building?6. Carole\'s father works as an electrician. >>CORRECT!!7. The tomatoes are 99 pence a kilo. >>CORRECT!!8. What do you usually have for breakfast? >>CORRECT!!9. Ben has terrible headache. >>Ben has a terrible headache.10. After this tour you have an whole afternoon free to explore the city. >>CORRECT!!

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