Hello Tina!

2013-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Good morning! It's a nice Monday. Nowadays I have been busy to prepare to go back to my school. I am really happy the fact that I will go school again in two years. So can you attend class at 7 o'clock? You know I will get into accommodation this comming Thursday. I can attend class until Friday. However next week, may be I should attend class at 7. Dare you possible? I hope that you are possible. Anyway good luck yo day! Here is my homework. 1. He correctly defined The terms. The answer sounded correctly. 2. She quickly adjusted the fees. She adapted quickly to any situation. 3. He measured the floor exactly. They proved to be perfectly exact measurements. 4. The stillness Of the tomb was awful. The tomb was awfully still. 5. It was a dangerous lake to swim in. The man was dangerously drunk. The gass smelled dangerously. 6. She performed magnificently. It was a magnificently beautiful performance. 7. Her voice sounds beautiful. She sang the song exactly when it wasa written. We heard it perfectly. 8. He was very sensible person. He acted very sensibly. 9. Mike wrote too slow on the exam. He always write slowly. 10. Talk softly or don't talk at all. The music played softly.

강사 첨삭

Hello there~~

A pleasant afternoon! Thanks for informing me about your schedule in advance! :)

About my schedule, I really can\'t tell because our schedules are changing everyday so perhaps it would be

better if you ask the manager about it. :)

Please check the corrections I made for you! ^^

Have a nice day and see you in class~~

T.Tina

Good morning! It\'s a nice Monday. Nowadays I have been busy to prepare to go back to my school.

>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!! Nowadays I have been busy preparing to go back to school.

I am really happy the fact that I will go school again in two years. So can you attend class at 7 o\'clock?

>>I am really happy knowing the fact that I will go back to school after 2 years. Do can you have my class at 7 o\'clock?

You know I will get into accommodation this comming Thursday. I can attend class until Friday.

>>You know I will get into accommodation this coming Thursday. I can attend class until Friday.

However next week, may be I should attend class at 7. Dare you possible? I hope that you are possible.

>>However next week, may be I should attend the class at 7. Do you it\'s possible? I hope you\'re available by then.
Anyway good luck yo day!

>>Anyway, good luck on your day!
Here is my homework.

>>CORRECT!!
1. He correctly defined The terms. The answer sounded correctly.

>>CORRECT!!
2. She quickly adjusted the fees. She adapted quickly to any situation.

>>CORRECT!!
3. He measured the floor exactly. They proved to be perfectly exact measurements.

>>CORRECT!!
4. The stillness Of the tomb was awful. The tomb was awfully still.

>>CORRECT!!
5. It was a dangerous lake to swim in. The man was dangerously drunk. The gass smelled dangerously.

>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!! Dangerous
6. She performed magnificently. It was a magnificently beautiful performance.

>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
7. Her voice sounds beautiful. She sang the song exactly when it wasa written. We heard it perfectly.

>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
8. He was very sensible person. He acted very sensibly.

>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
9. Mike wrote too slow on the exam. He always write slowly.

>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
10. Talk softly or don\'t talk at all. The music played softly.

>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!!

 

 

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