Hello Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there~~
A pleasant afternoon! Thanks for informing me about your schedule in advance! :)
About my schedule, I really can\'t tell because our schedules are changing everyday so perhaps it would be
better if you ask the manager about it. :)
Please check the corrections I made for you! ^^
Have a nice day and see you in class~~
T.Tina
Good morning! It\'s a nice Monday. Nowadays I have been busy to prepare to go back to my school.
>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!! Nowadays I have been busy preparing to go back to school.
I am really happy the fact that I will go school again in two years. So can you attend class at 7 o\'clock?
>>I am really happy knowing the fact that I will go back to school after 2 years. Do can you have my class at 7 o\'clock?
You know I will get into accommodation this comming Thursday. I can attend class until Friday.
>>You know I will get into accommodation this coming Thursday. I can attend class until Friday.
However next week, may be I should attend class at 7. Dare you possible? I hope that you are possible.
>>However next week, may be I should attend the class at 7. Do you it\'s possible? I hope you\'re available by then.
Anyway good luck yo day!
>>Anyway, good luck on your day!
Here is my homework.
>>CORRECT!!
1. He correctly defined The terms. The answer sounded correctly.
>>CORRECT!!
2. She quickly adjusted the fees. She adapted quickly to any situation.
>>CORRECT!!
3. He measured the floor exactly. They proved to be perfectly exact measurements.
>>CORRECT!!
4. The stillness Of the tomb was awful. The tomb was awfully still.
>>CORRECT!!
5. It was a dangerous lake to swim in. The man was dangerously drunk. The gass smelled dangerously.
>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!! Dangerous
6. She performed magnificently. It was a magnificently beautiful performance.
>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
7. Her voice sounds beautiful. She sang the song exactly when it wasa written. We heard it perfectly.
>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
8. He was very sensible person. He acted very sensibly.
>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
9. Mike wrote too slow on the exam. He always write slowly.
>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
10. Talk softly or don\'t talk at all. The music played softly.
>>CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
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