Hello Tina!

2013-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jehann

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning! I am happy to hear about your good condition. Take care. I will relocate to my accommodation tomorrow. I think it will be really funny to become a neighbor with my friends. However this place is not good for protecting noise, may be I will have some difficulty to attend class. I heard that my friend's room is located in th inner side and have a window. May be I will be able to give some help from him. Hahaha. Then see you tomorrow! Here is my homework. 1. To 2. Into 3. In 4. On 5. Onto 6.Toward 7. On 8. In 9. On 10. On

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon! thank you for being so diligent. I admire you for that! By the way, I hope that you\'ll feel more comfortable with your new place. You can spend more time with your friends now. That\'s really nice. Anyway, please check my correction for today\'s homework. Have a peaceful day and see you tomorrow.

---Teacher Tina---

Good morning! I am happy to hear about your good condition.Take care.

>>Correct.

I will relocate to my accommodation tomorrow.

>>  I will relocate to my new accommodation tomorrow.

>> OR: I am going to move to a new place tomorrow.

I think it will be really funny to become a neighbor with my friends. 

>>  I think it will be really funny to become neighbors with my friends. 

>> OR I think it will be really fun to become neighbors with my friends. 

However this place is not good for protecting noise, may be I will have some difficulty to attend class.

>>  However this place is not good because it\'s noisy, may be I will have some difficulty attending your class.

I heard that my friend\'s room is located in th inner side and have a window.

>>  I heard that my friend\'s room is located in the inner side and it has a window.

May be I will be able to give some help from him. Hahaha.

>>  Maybe I will be able to get some help from him. Hahaha

>> OR: Maybe he can help me if I\'ll encounter some problems.

Then see you tomorrow!

>> See you then tomorrow.
Here is my homework.
>>Correct.

1. To

>>Correct.

2. Into

>>Correct.

3. In

>>Correct.

4. On

>>Correct.

>> OR: onto

5. Onto

>> On

6.Toward

>>Correct.

7. On

>>Correct.

>> OR: onto

8. In

>>Correct.

>> OR: into

9. On

>>Correct.

10. On

>>Correct.

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