Hello Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello! Long time no see. I'm sorry for late my homework. Maybe I should attend the class everyday and since I spend most of my time in library, I mostly do my homework at night. So understand me please~ Anyway it was a great class for me too except low temperature. hahaha. And I was happy to share my story with you. My dream will come true this Saturday! Please pray for me to have a great time with her. Also I have an another good news today! I am going to tell you tomorrow. See you!
Here is my homework.
1. went
2. woke
3. lost
4. wrote
5. met
6. read
7. came
8. went
9. had
10. bought
강사 첨삭
Hi there James^^
Thank you for your effort in doing this homework. I really appreciate it. You almost got a perfect score. Please check the following corrections for the sentences with correct answers. You still did a great job. I hope you all the best this Saturday^^ Let\'s talk more about this in class.
See you^^
T.Tina
Hello! Long time no see.
>>Correct
I\'m sorry for late my homework.
>>I\'m sorry for doing my homework late.
Maybe I should attend the class everyday and since I spend most of my time in library, I mostly do my homework at night.
>>Maybe I should attend the class everyday and since I spend most of my time in the library, I usually do my homework in the evening.
So understand me please~
>>So please understand me.
Anyway it was a great class for me too except low temperature. hahaha.
>>Anyway, it was a great class for me too. Except for the the low temperature. Hahaha.
And I was happy to share my story with you.
>>Correct
My dream will come true this Saturday!
>>Correct
Please pray for me to have a great time with her.
>>Please pray for me that I will have a great time with her.
Also I have an another good news today!
>>Also, I have another good news today!
I am going to tell you tomorrow. See you>>Correct ( Don\'t forget your punctuatuion mark^^)
Here is my homework.1. went
>>Correct2. woke>>got
3. lost
>>Correct4. wrote
>>Correct5. met
>>Correct6. read
>>Correct7. came
>>Correct8. went
>>Correct9. had
>>Correct10. bought
>>Correct
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