Hello Tina!

2013-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

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Good evening! You know, I really really hope that I have a two body. I'm terribly busy nowadays. It never be compared when I was freshman. But most important thing, I can feel that it is very lively and passionate. Frankly speaking, I'm tired currently,however,I think that this life style will be compensated someday. HA!HA! Anyway see you tomorrow! Here is my homework. 1. watch 2. are 3. washes 4. has 5. buy 6. play 7. is 8. am 9. have 10. does

강사 첨삭

Good Morning James!! 

Don\'t you worry for sure that you will get used to with your routine and you\'ll love it! ^^ 

These are just some ways to help you develop and mature. It is preparing you to be more responsible in life. ^^ 

Great job with your homework!! You\'ve got a perfect score. ^^ 

See you later!! :)

~~~T.Tina~~~


Good evening!

>>>Correct!!^^

You know, I really really hope that I have a two body.

>>>You know, I really hope that I have two bodies. 

I\'m terribly busy nowadays.

>>>Correct!!^^

It never be compared when I was freshman.

>>>It will never be compared when I was a freshman. 

But most important thing,

>>>But the most important thing is

I can feel that it is very lively and passionate.

>>>I can feel that I am more lively and more passionate. 

Frankly speaking,

>>>Correct!!^^

I\'m tired currently,

>>>I\'m currently tired, 

however,I think that this life style will be compensated someday.

>>>however, I think that I can compensate with this life style someday. 

HA!HA! Anyway see you tomorrow!
>>>Correct!!^^
 Here is my homework.

1. watch

>>>Correct!!^^

2. are

>>>Correct!!^^

3. washes

>>>Correct!!^^

4. has

>>>Correct!!^^

5. buy

>>>Correct!!^^

6. play

>>>Correct!!^^

7. is

>>>Correct!!^^

8. am

>>>Correct!!^^

9. have

>>>Correct!!^^

10. does

>>>Correct!!^^

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