Hello Tina!

2013-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

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Hello~ I think it is already Wednesday. I got back home right away from library with my friends. I think it was a very worthwhile day that I could meet a lot of people, do a lot of study, go to gym to work out my muscles and so on. Today in advance conversation class, our professor gave us an assignment that we should spend sometime with our group and take a picture to prove this. And she make a group for us, in my group, all members are girls except me! Ha! Ha! Ha! Thanks professor! You know I just want to write my daily life. Then I am going to study. See you! Here is my homework. 1. We should announce this fact to let know everyone. 2. He makes me annoying by giggling. 3. The arrival time is at noon. 4. Teacher makes students arrange their tools. 5. I am going to go to bank to make my account.

강사 첨삭

Good Morning James!! ^^ 

I am so happy to hear that you are having such a great time with your activities. It\'s really nice of you to always expose yourself for you to gain more insights. Always remember, \"Experience is the best teacher!\" Just enjoy the things that you are doing! ^^ See you later. :)

~~~T.Tina~~~

Hello~ I think it is already Wednesday.

>>>Correct!! ^^

I got back home right away from library with my friends.

>>>I just got back from the library with my friends. 

I think it was a very worthwhile day that I could meet a lot of people,

>>>Correct!! ^^

do a lot of study,

>>>study a lot, 

go to gym to work out my muscles and so on.

>>>Correct!! ^^

Today in advance conversation class,

>>>Today, in our advance conversation class, 

our professor gave us an assignment  

>>>our professor gave as an assignment.

that we should spend sometime with our group and take a picture to prove this.

>>>He asked us to spend some time with our group and take a picture to prove this.  

And she make a group for us,

>>>She made a group for us.

in my group, all members are girls except me!

>>>Correct!! ^^

>>>In my group, all members are girls except me!

Ha! Ha! Ha! Thanks professor! 

>>>Correct!! ^^

You know I just want to write my daily life.

>>>Correct!! ^^

Then I am going to study.

>>>I\'m going to study now.

See you!

>>>Correct!! ^^

Here is my homework.
>>>Correct!! ^^
1. We should announce this fact to let know everyone.

>>>We should announce this fact to let everyone know. 

2. He makes me annoying by giggling.

>>>He is so annoying every time he is giggling. 

3. The arrival time is at noon.

>>>Correct!! ^^

4. Teacher makes students arrange their tools.

>>>The teacher makes the students arrange their tools. 

5. I am going to go to bank to make my account.

>>>I am going to the bank to make an account. 

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