Hello Tina!

2013-03-14 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon! One of our professors cancels his lecture. So I have a time to do my homework this time. Yesterday I went to bed so lately to finish reviewing my major. So in the early class I was so sleepy. Thus, I tried to do your method that is to drink a lot of water. It worked! I could endure sleep better than before. I will try this method every time I am sleepy. Any thank you for giving good comment for me then see you tomorrow! Here is my homework. 1. playing bowling 2. skiing 3. playing golf 4. play tennis tomorrow 5. doing some exercise

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon James!! ^^ Wow!! You were able to answer your homework perfectly!! Keep up the good work. Just always do your best or give your best shot with all the things that you want to achieve and for sure that you will get what you work for. ^^ Go eat your lunch now!! ^^ See you tomorrow!! ~~ ~~~T.Tina~~~ Good afternoon! >>>Correct!! ^^ One of our professors cancels his lecture. >>>One of our professors canceled his class. So I have a time to do my homework this time. >>>So I had the time to do my homework. Yesterday I went to bed so lately to finish reviewing my major. >>>I went to bed so late for reviewing my major. So in the early class I was so sleepy. >>>So  I felt sleepy during my early class. Thus, I tried to do your method that is to drink a lot of water. It worked! >>>I tried to follow your method to drink lots of water and it worked! I could endure sleep better than before. >>>I could endure being sleepy better than before. I will try this method every time I am sleepy. >>>Correct!! ^^ Any thank you for giving good comment for me then see you tomorrow!>>>Anyway, thank you so mucj for giving good comments for me. See you tomorrow! Here is my homework.1. playing bowling>>>Correct!! ^^ 2. skiing >>>Correct!! ^^3. playing golf >>>Correct!! ^^4. play tennis tomorrow>>>Correct!! ^^ 5. doing some exercise >>>Correct!! ^^  

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