Hello Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon! I came back home after finishing my club behavior. Oh since I have been a while doing basketball it was such a great time. Anyway I really appreciate your comment. Intonation, yeah I think it is very important. The main reason why I got a high score in TOEIC SPEAKING TEST is I tried hard to correct my pronunciation. After changing my pronunciation a little to be good, I can have a confidence. So I can emerge and speak my opinion without nervous. I think intonation is as important as pronunciation. However teacher, I read a book that I should end high during speaking some sentence. like' Gwen is pretty girl' 'Sam teaches English' So exactly when I should start high and end low?
Then see you tomorrow! Good bye~
Here is my homework.
1. A small of farmers but growing number are using robotic technology to get milk from cows.
2. These farmers invested in robotic milking systems.
3. Supporters say the job of farmers of the system it makes easier and increases milk production.
4. Mike Schutz is an agricultural expert at Purdue University in West Lafayette, Indiana.
5. He says robotic technology has been used in Canada and Europe for several years.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!!! ^^
I appreciate you doing good with your homework.
There are just some corrections but that\'s alright. ^^
I know you could still do better next time.
Have a great evening ahead.
Teacher Tina ^_^
Good afternoon!
>> CORRECT!
I came back home after finishing my club behavior.
>> CORRECT!
Oh since I have been a while doing basketball it was such a great time. >> MAYBE YOU MEAN TO SAY: I had been having a great time playing basketball.
Anyway I really appreciate your comment.
>> CORRECT!
Intonation, yeah I think it is very important. >> CORRECT!
The main reason why I got a high score in TOEIC SPEAKING TEST is I tried hard to correct my pronunciation.
>> CORRECT!
After changing my pronunciation a little to be good, I can have a confidence.
>> Aftre changing my pronunciation a little better, I had confidence.
So I can emerge and speak my opinion without nervous. >> So, I can emerge and speak my opinion without getting nervous.
I think intonation is as important as pronunciation.
>> CORRECT!
However teacher, I read a book that I should end high during speaking some sentence.
>> CORRECT!
like\' Gwen is pretty girl\' \'Sam teaches English\'
>> CORRECT!
So exactly when I should start high and end low?
>> So when exactly should I start high and end low? Then see you tomorrow! Good bye~>> See you tomorrow! Good bye~Here is my homework.>>1. A small of farmers but growing number are using robotic technology to get milk from cows.
>> A small but growing number of farmers are using robotic technology to get milk from cows.2. These farmers invested in robotic milking systems.
>> CORRECT!3. Supporters say the job of farmers of the system it makes easier and increases milk production.
>> Supporters of the system say it makes the job of farmers easier and increases milk production.
4. Mike Schutz is an agricultural expert at Purdue University in West Lafayette, Indiana. >> CORRECT!
5. He says robotic technology has been used in Canada and Europe for several years.
>> CORRECT!
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