Hello Tina!

2013-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

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It's a really happy Friday. Finally!!! it will be a weekend tomorrow! I will be able to take a rest in weekend. First, before taking a rest, I should stay library all night long to finish my homework and for weekend. Anyway I hope that you will be able to have a nice weekend with your love ones. See you on Monday! Here is my homework. 1. I want to find what's Brazil like? 2. I can't remember did Benjamin Franklin write 'Poor Richard's Almanac'? 3. Can you tell me how do you do it? 4. I'd like to know who did you meet at the party? 5. I wonder who did you meet at the party? 6. Nobody cares what happened to them? 7. Can you tell me how important is that meeting to the company? 8. Nobody remembers when was the film produced? 9. I don't know have they flown an ultralight too? 10. I can't remember what is it called in English?

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thank God it\'s Friday^^ We can finally rest and relax. I hope you could find ways to relax yourself this weekend. I would be glad to hear your stories nextweek about your weekend. Anyway, don\'t feel bad about the result of your homework. We can still work out on that=) There are no secrets to success. It is the result of preparation, hard work, and learning from failure. So do not get tired from learning^^ Well, I\'ll see you again! Take care and have a great weekend! ~Teacher Tina It\'s a really happy Friday. >>CORRECT Finally!!! >>CORRECT it will be a weekend tomorrow! >>CORRECT >>OR: It will be the start of weekend tomorrow. I will be able to take a rest in weekend. >>I will be able to rest during the weekend.  First, before taking a rest, I should stay library all night long to finish my homework and for weekend. >>But before resting, I have to stay in the library all night to finish my homework. Anyway I hope that you will be able to have a nice weekend with your love ones. >>CORRECT >>Anyway, I hope that you will be able to have a nice weekend with your loved ones. See you on Monday!>>CORRECTHere is my homework.1. I want to find what\'s Brazil like? >>I want to find out what Brazil is like.2. I can\'t remember did Benjamin Franklin write \'Poor Richard\'s Almanac\'? >>I can\'t remember if Benjamin Franklin wrote \"Poor Richard\'s Almanac.\"3. Can you tell me how do you do it? >>Can you tell me how you do it?4. I\'d like to know who did you meet at the party? >>I\'d like to know who you met at the party.5. I wonder who did you meet at the party? >>I wonder how long have you been waiting for me.6. Nobody cares what happened to them? >>CORRECT >>Nobody cares what happened to them.7. Can you tell me how important is that meeting to the company? >>CORRECT >>OR: Can you tell me how important that meeting is to the company?8. Nobody remembers when was the film produced? >>CORRECT >>Nobody remember when the film was produced.9. I don\'t know have they flown an ultralight too? >>I don\'t know if they have flown an ultralight too.10. I can\'t remember what is it called in English? >>I can\'t remember what it is called in English.

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