Hello Tina!

2013-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

Monday starts again! Let us make our mind strong and spend our time worthwhile. As I mentioned already I had a study group that I record my study our and analyze the study of distribution chart with my friends. The main goal of this week is to achieve the study our more than 60 hour. I really want to achieve this goal. I always don't exceed 51 hour. If I achieve my goal, I will be able to regard I can accomplish my goal. Anyway enjoy your day. See you tomorrow! Here is my homework. 2. The candidate I voted for the candidate didn't win the election. 3. The students they were absent from the school missed the assignment. 4. The town I grew up is small. 5. Every one tried to help the family because their house had burned down. 6. The students who sit in the front now are from the China. 7. The report jack is writing must be finished by Friday. 8. Those students whose native language is not English are working very hard. 9. You are sitting in a chair that is comfortable. 10. The bench I sit on it is wet.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

Thanks for answering your homework! You can do better next time =)

I\'ll talk to you then in our class.

~~ T. Tina

Monday starts again!

>> CORRECT

Let us make our mind strong and spend our time worthwhile.

>> CORRECT

As I mentioned already I had a study group that I record my study our and analyze the study of distribution chart with my friends.

>> As I already mentioned, i had a study group and I recorded our study and analyzed the distribution chart with my friends.

The main goal of this week is to achieve the study our more than 60 hour.

>> The main goal this week is to achieve more than 60 hours of studying.

I really want to achieve this goal.

>> CORRECT

I always don\'t exceed 51 hour.

>> I don\'t always exceed for 51 hours.

If I achieve my goal, I will be able to regard I can accomplish my goal.

>> If I will achieve my goal, I will be able to regard that I can accomplish it. 

Anyway enjoy your day.

>> Anyway, enjoy your day!

See you tomorrow!
>> CORRECT
Here is my homework.
2. The candidate I voted for the candidate didn\'t win the election.

>> The candidate for whom I  voted didn\'t win the election. 
3. The students they were absent from the school missed the assignment.

>> The students who were absent from the class missed the assignment.
4. The town I grew up is small.

>> The town where I grew up is small.
5. Every one tried to help the family because their house had burned down.

>> Everyone tried to help the family whose house had burned down.
6. The students who sit in the front now are from the China.

>> CORRECT
7. The report jack is writing must be finished by Friday.

>> CORRECT
8. Those students whose native language is not English are working very hard.

>> CORRECT
9. You are sitting in a chair that is comfortable.

>> CORRECT
10. The bench I sit on it is wet.

>> The bench I sat on was wet.

>> or, The bench which I sat on was wet.

>> or, The bench that I sat on was wet.

>> or, The bench on which I sat was wet.

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