Hello Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thanks for answering your homework! You can do better next time =)
I\'ll talk to you then in our class.
~~ T. Tina
Monday starts again!
>> CORRECT
Let us make our mind strong and spend our time worthwhile.
>> CORRECT
As I mentioned already I had a study group that I record my study our and analyze the study of distribution chart with my friends.
>> As I already mentioned, i had a study group and I recorded our study and analyzed the distribution chart with my friends.
The main goal of this week is to achieve the study our more than 60 hour.
>> The main goal this week is to achieve more than 60 hours of studying.
I really want to achieve this goal.
>> CORRECT
I always don\'t exceed 51 hour.
>> I don\'t always exceed for 51 hours.
If I achieve my goal, I will be able to regard I can accomplish my goal.
>> If I will achieve my goal, I will be able to regard that I can accomplish it.
Anyway enjoy your day.
>> Anyway, enjoy your day!
See you tomorrow!
>> CORRECT
Here is my homework.
2. The candidate I voted for the candidate didn\'t win the election.
>> The candidate for whom I voted didn\'t win the election.
3. The students they were absent from the school missed the assignment.
>> The students who were absent from the class missed the assignment.
4. The town I grew up is small.
>> The town where I grew up is small.
5. Every one tried to help the family because their house had burned down.
>> Everyone tried to help the family whose house had burned down.
6. The students who sit in the front now are from the China.
>> CORRECT
7. The report jack is writing must be finished by Friday.
>> CORRECT
8. Those students whose native language is not English are working very hard.
>> CORRECT
9. You are sitting in a chair that is comfortable.
>> CORRECT
10. The bench I sit on it is wet.
>> The bench I sat on was wet.
>> or, The bench which I sat on was wet.
>> or, The bench that I sat on was wet.
>> or, The bench on which I sat was wet.
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