Hello Tina!

2013-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good after noon! Did you enjoy your lunch? I ate ramen with my friends. Next week, I will take a test on English conversation. It is professor will give us some topics respectively per person. We can't know other students topic. After that we start conversation with our own topics. I hope that I will not be nervous when I speak. Actually I think, I will not be nervous to speak in English because thanks to this class I have a confidence and get rid of hesitation. Anyway thanks for giving me some comments then see you tomorrow! Here is my home work. 1. c 2. a 3. b 4. a 5. a 6. a 7. b 8. c I think today's home work as same as yesterday.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

Yeah, I already had my lunch and I enjoyed it. Hope you enjoyed having your lunch also.

That\'s the confidence! Of course you can speak and you should not feel nervous when it is your turn to speak. I know that you can do it. Fighting!

I wish you luck then. I\'ll see you! ^^

~~ T. Tina

Good after noon!

>> Good afternoon!

Did you enjoy your lunch?

>> CORRECT

I ate ramen with my friends.

>> CORRECT
Next week, I will take a test on English conversation.

>> CORRECT

It is professor will give us some topics respectively per person.

>> It is the professor who is going to give every person some topics respectively. 

 We can\'t know other students topic.

>> We don\'t know the topic of the other students.

After that we start conversation with our own topics.

>> After that, we are going to discuss our own topic.

 I hope that I will not be nervous when I speak.

>> CORRECT

Actually I think, I will not be nervous to speak in English because thanks to this class I have a confidence and get rid of hesitation.

>> Actually, I think that I will not be nervous to speak in English. Thanks to this class, I have the confidence to get rid of the hesitation to speak.

Anyway thanks for giving me some comments then see you tomorrow!
>> CORRECT
Here is my home work.
1. c

>> CORRECT
2. a

>> CORRECT
3. b

>> CORRECT
4. a

>> CORRECT
5. a

>> CORRECT
6. a

>> CORRECT
7. b

>> CORRECT
8. c

>> CORRECT
I think today\'s home work as same as yesterday.

>> I think today\'s homework is the same as yesterday.

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