Hello Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
Good evening! Did you enjoy your day? I was so so so tired today. I was nearly falling asleep all day long. However Today was the most number of lecture. I pinched my thigh all day long and I guess that I drink water more than 2L. Fortunately one of my professor canceled my last class. Since I had a basketball activity today, I take a sleep for one hour. After sleeping, I felt very refreshed. So I could play very well in my club. I stressed out after activity, and now it is my friends birthday so I will go to party! After a long time I will be able to stress out totally! Anyway I hope you to enjoy your long holiday, then see you tomorrow!
Teacher..I'm afraid to say but I can't understand how to do my homework. What's a 'box a star'?
강사 첨삭
Hi there!!! ^^
I appreciate you sharing your activity today.
That was a very hectic schedule. But I am grateful to know that you made it through.
Regarding your homework, you need to match the numbers into the letters.
You need to combine two words.
Have a great evening ahead.
Teacher Tina ^_^
Good evening!
>> CORRECT!
Did you enjoy your day? >> CORRECT!
I was so so so tired today.
>> CORRECT!
I was nearly falling asleep all day long.
>> MAYBE YOU MEAN TO SAY: I felt very sleepy all day long.
However Today was the most number of lecture.
>> However, I had the most number of lectures today.
I pinched my thigh all day long and I guess that I drink water more than 2L.
>> I pinched my thigh all day long and I guess I drank water more than 2L.
Fortunately one of my professor canceled my last class.
>> CORRECT!
Since I had a basketball activity today, I take a sleep for one hour.
>> Since I had a basketball activity today, I slept for one hour.
After sleeping, I felt very refreshed.
>> CORRECT!
So I could play very well in my club.
>> CORRECT!
I stressed out after activity, and now it is my friends birthday so I will go to party!
>> I stressed out after the activity and right now is my friend\'s birthday so I will go to party!
After a long time I will be able to stress out totally!
>> CORRECT!
Anyway I hope you to enjoy your long holiday, then see you tomorrow!>> Anyway, I hope you too enjoy your long holiday, so see you next week!Teacher..I\'m afraid to say but I can\'t understand how to do my homework. What\'s a \'box a star\'?
>> CORRECT!
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