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COMPOSITION WRITING: Recount a time when you found yourself in a dangerous situation. Tell the story of how you got into that situation and how you survived it. - Hello. Venus. I know I'm wondering now. When I received your class, I had a definite goal. To be a good person, I think I did my best about self develop. But more pass time faster, more feel this situation is dangerous. Everyone agrees that I must not get lazy anymore. But It's really difficult for forgetting your first intention. If we get trouble in this trouble, We will have to ensure that our goal never disappear. I always worry about my future and job. I believe that we will be a successful person.

Hello [이름]!   You are amazing.These are common expressions: 1. as time goes by As time goes by means as time passes or moves. The passing of time. \'As time has gone by I have become less interested in going to nightclubs on the weekends.\'   2. To get into trouble -to get into difficulty or danger   Teacher Venus^^   Hello. Venus. >>>Hello Venus.   I know I\'m wondering now. >>>CORRECT   When I received your class, I had a definite goal. >>>CORRECT   To be a good person, I think I did my best about self develop. >>>To be a good person, I think I did my best to improve myself.   But more pass time faster, more feel this situation is dangerous. >>>But as time goes by, I feel this situation is getting more dangerous.   Everyone agrees that I must not get lazy anymore. >>>CORRECT   But It\'s really difficult for forgetting your first intention. >>>But it\'s really difficult for me to forget our first intention.   If we get trouble in this trouble, We will have to ensure that our goal never disappear. >>>If we get into trouble, we will have to ensure that our goal will never disappear.   I always worry about my future and job. >>>CORRECT   I believe that we will be a successful person. >>>I believe that we will be successful people.