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Hello. Teacher~ Happy Wendsday! -COMPOSITION WRITING: Describe a time when you witnessed something unbelievable. I had a time when I witnessed something unbelievable. It's a story that happen three months ago. The day was I strolled through fence on the army. The time was late night and it's really dark outside. Suddenly, Something rushed out in the woods near the fence. And It quickly climbed a mountain. It looked like really fast and big. I think it might be an animal. I guess a boar or an elk. I was surprised that situation. In the other hand, I wondered what it is.

Hello [이름]!   You are really getting better everyday. Some reminders: 1. surprised / shocked / amazed  / astonished  AT / BY something Everyone was surprised by /at the news.   2. On the other hand It is a phrase introducing an alternate view   Teacher Venus^^   Hello. Teacher~ Happy Wendsday! >>>Hello Teacher~ Happy Wednesday! I had a time when I witnessed something unbelievable. >>>I witnessed something unbelievable.   It\'s a story that happen three months ago. >>>It\'s a story that happened three months ago.   The day was I strolled through fence on the army. >>>That day, I was strolling along the fence.   The time was late night and it\'s really dark outside. >>>The time was late at night and it\'s really dark outside.   Suddenly, Something rushed out in the woods near the fence. >>>Suddenly, something rushed out in the woods near the fence.   And It quickly climbed a mountain. >>>And it quickly climbed a mountain.    It looked like really fast and big. >>>It looked really fast and big.   I think it might be an animal. >>>CORRECT   I guess a boar or an elk. >>>CORRECT   I was surprised that situation. >>>I was surprised at that situation.   In the other hand, I wondered what it is. >>>On the other hand, I wondered what it is.