Hello Venus~

2016-02-02 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

-My answer: Hello. My brother. Did you buy a new car? I heard that by many friends. Congratulations! I know you have been very busy recently. And you always do your best for your work. Thanks to your effort, you got a happy result which is a new car. What kind of your car is it? what's the color of car? Have you drived already? How was it? I'm really eager to hear about your car. Call me as soon as you receive my voice message. -HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Use "to" if it is needed or "x" if nothing is needed. Karen needed to go to class. But she decided to go shopping instead. So first she went to the bank to get money. Next she went to a restaurant. Then she went a huge shopping mall where she bought a new sweater and a hat. After that she decided to go to the supermarket go get some groceries. At the end of the day, she was tire.

강사 첨삭

    Hello [이름]! You\'re really working hard today. Some reminders: 1. You can use \'go traveling\' or \'travel\' but not \'go to travel\'. 2. Notice the uses of \'to\': First, as a preposition, in which case it always precedes a noun. I’m going to the store. It indicates an infinitive when it precedes a verb. I need to study Teacher Venus^^   -My answer: Hello. My brother. >>>Hello my brother.   Did you buy a new car? >>>CORRECT   I heard that by many friends. >>>I heard that from our friends.   Congratulations! >>>CORRECT   I know you have been very busy recently. >>>CORRECT   And you always do your best for your work. >>>And you always do your best at work.   Thanks to your effort, you got a happy result which is a new car. >>>Thanks to your effort, you got a new car.   What kind of your car is it? >>>What kind of car is it?   what\'s the color of car? >>>What\'s the color of your car?   Have you drived already? >>>Have you driven it already   How was it? >>>CORRECT I\'m really eager to hear about your car. >>>CORRECT   Call me as soon as you receive my voice message. >>>CORRECT -HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Use \"to\" if it is needed or \"x\" if nothing is needed.Karen needed to go to class. >>>CORRECT   But she decided to go shopping instead. >>>CORRECT   So first she went to the bank to get money. >>>CORRECT   Next she went to a restaurant. >>>CORRECT   Then she went a huge shopping mall where she bought a new sweater and a hat. >>>Then she went to a huge shopping mall where she bought a new sweater and a hat.   After that she decided to go to the supermarket go get some groceries. >>>After that she decided to go to the supermarket to get some groceries.   At the end of the day, she was tire. >>>At the end of the day, she was tired.

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