Hello Venus~

□I really like to listen to music. The kind of music I like is pop song. It's really exciting and energetic. I'm pleased that you enjoy listening to music. We have a same hobby. I would like to hear about your inclination when it comes to good music. Let me ask you five questions. What music genre do you enjoy listening to? Who do you like music artist? Where do you usually like to listen to music? How is your feeling when you listen to music? Do you have particular songs that you hate to hear? I'm really wondering about you answer. □ COMPOSITION WRITING: Write about the most horrible food you ever had. What was it and why did you dislike it so much? -My answer: My most horrible food is dog meat until now. Although I had several chances, I never have eaten it. Because I have an experience that I raised dog. So I'm disgusted with food made of dog. People usually so like to eat dog meat that recommend for eating it. It's really terrible.

Hello [이름]!   You are really improving. Some reminders: 1. Until now usually means that it was one way, up until this moment. At this moment it is no longer that way. Ex: \"Until now, I never knew what that was\" Meaning: I didn\'t know what that was. Now I do.   2. Having experince in... - often followed by a gerund (verb with \'noun qualities\')\"I have experience in handling dogs\"\'Experience\' means \'knowledge gained about an action by actual practical work\' in this case. Teacher Venus^^   I really like to listen to music. >>>CORRECT    The kind of music I like is pop song. >>>CORRECT   It\'s really exciting and energetic. >>>CORRECT   I\'m pleased that you enjoy listening to music. >>>CORRECT   We have a same hobby. >>>We have the same hobby.   I would like to hear about your inclination when it comes to good music. >>>CORRECT   Let me ask you five questions. >>>CORRECT   What music genre do you enjoy listening to? >>>CORRECT   Who do you like music artist? >>>Who are the music artists that you like?   Where do you usually like to listen to music? >>>CORRECT   How is your feeling when you listen to music? >>>How do you feel when you listen to music?   Do you have particular songs that you hate to hear? >>>CORRECT   I\'m really wondering about you answer. >>>CORRECT COMPOSITION WRITING: Write about the most horrible food you ever had. What was it and why did you dislike it so much? -My answer: My most horrible food is dog meat until now. >>>The most horrible food is dog meat.   Although I had several chances, I never have eaten it. >>>Although I had several chances, I have never eaten it.   Because I have an experience that I raised dog. >>>Because I have an experience in raising a dog.   So I\'m disgusted with food made of dog. >>>So I\'m disgusted with food made of dogs.   People usually so like to eat dog meat that recommend for eating it. >>>People usually like to eat dog meat that they recommend others to eat it.   It\'s really terrible. >>>CORRECT