Hello Venus~
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☆HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
COMPOSITION WRITING: What is the most interesting thing you have ever seen in the sky? Write about what it was and what it looked like. Where did you see it? What did you think about it?
-My answer: I don't think that I have seen a special thing ever in the sky. I never have seen a shooting star, UFOs. I usually see a lot of stars in the sky. Sometimes, I saw combat plane. The plane makes two long line in the sky. It's a huge gas emitting in the exhaust pipe. At times, It's gorgeous! It looks like a picture of artist.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I\'m glad you tried your best. Some reminders:
Ever means ‘at any time’. It is mainly used in questions.
Teacher Venus^^
My answer: I don\'t think that I have seen a special thing ever in the sky.
>>>I don\'t think that I have seen a special thing in the sky.
I never have seen a shooting star, UFOs.
>>>I have never seen a shooting star and UFOs.
I usually see a lot of stars in the sky.
>>>CORRECT
Sometimes, I saw combat plane.
>>>Sometimes, I saw a combat plane.
The plane makes two long line in the sky.
>>>The plane makes two long lines in the sky.
It\'s a huge gas emitting in the exhaust pipe.
>>>It\'s a huge gas emitted from the exhaust pipe.
At times, It\'s gorgeous!
>>>At times, it\'s gorgeous!
It looks like a picture of artist.
>>>It looks like a picture of an artist.
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