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□ HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: COMPOSITION WRITING: Have you ever forgotten something of extreme importance? Write about your experience. -My answer: I don't have a idea that I have forgotten something of extreme importance. I sometimes have forgotten what I talk to somebody while our conversation. If conversation is long and complicated, I'm confused the intention talked to somebody. For example, suppose I was talking to my friend. At the same time, somebody talked to me about another subject each private thing and my schedule. Then, I was confused what I saying.

Hello [이름]!   I like it that you tried your best.  You have good ideas but your sentences are mixed-up. Read my corrections and remember them.   Teacher Venus^^   My answer: I don\'t have a idea that I have forgotten something of extreme importance. >>>I think I haven\'t forgotten something of extreme importance.   I sometimes have forgotten what I talk to somebody while our conversation. >>>I sometimes have forgotten what I was supposed to say.   If conversation is long and complicated, I\'m confused the intention talked to somebody. >>>If the conversation is long and complicated, I get confused.   For example, suppose I was talking to my friend. >>>For example, suppose I was talking to my friend.   At the same time, somebody talked to me about another subject each private thing and my schedule. >>>At the same time, somebody talked to me about another subject.   Then, I was confused what I saying. >>>Then, I forget what I was supposed to say.