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2016-02-15 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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-Questions:You are supposed to register for courses this coming semester. Make a call to the office handling student registration and inquire about the process on signing up for a new course. -My answer: Hello. Is it right the office handling student registration? This is [이름], a freshman in graduate school. I'm supposed to register for courses this coming semester. I would like to inquire several things about my courses. Could you tell me when does it start for registrating? When is the deadline for singning up? How many maximum units of class can I take this semester? Although I tried to find my questions in website, I can't get imformation to solve my questions. Please, give me a hand. -HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Choose the correct answer. 1. Civil war was declared and the streets ran with blood. 2. Batman's rival was the Joker. 3. The road will curve to the right and then go straight through the park. 4. A lover is more than a friend. 5. The symbol of peace is the dove.

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Hello [이름]!   You have a good idea about the topic. Some reminders: 1. Don\'t forget your prepositions. example: inquire about several things 2. Notice the structure of this sentence. Could you tell me when the registration starts?   Teacher Venus^^   -My answer: Hello. >>>CORRECT   Is it right the office handling student registration? >>>Is this the office handling student registration?   This is [이름], a freshman in graduate school. >>>CORRECT   I\'m supposed to register for courses this coming semester. >>>I\'m supposed to register for courses this coming semester.   I would like to inquire several things about my courses. >>>I would like to inquire about my courses.   Could you tell me when does it start for registrating? >>>Could you tell me when the registration starts?   When is the deadline for singning up? >>>When is the deadline for signing up?   How many maximum units of class can I take this semester? >>>CORRECT   Although I tried to find my questions in website, I can\'t get imformation to solve my questions. >>>Although I tried to find the answers in the website, I can\'t get information to answer my questions.   Please, give me a hand. >>>CORRECT-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Choose the correct answer.1. Civil war was declared and the streets ran with blood. >>>CORRECT 2. Batman\'s rival was the Joker. >>>CORRECT 3. The road will curve to the right and then go straight through the park. >>>CORRECT 4. A lover is more than a friend. >>>CORRECT 5. The symbol of peace is the dove. >>>CORRECT

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