Hello Venus~

2016-02-29 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:COMPOSITION WRITING: Pick a number, then write about it -> Hello Venus. Today, I will talk to you about the limitation. I would like to write limitation of learning. You know we had classes for 3 months. Thanks to you, I have been pleased since I received your call at first. I had a great time everyday. That's really true. I think that you taught well English to me. So, I got confident for speaking in English. There is no limitation for learning about something. For example, math, English, Korea, science, and simple work. We can not only learn all of the subject but also wisdom of life. I mean that if we decide to achieve the goal, there are no fails. But most of people make their possibility low for themselves. For example, Someone can say "I can't do it" before they challenge it. There are no limitation to us. but the limitation is decided for ourselves. Thank you for seeing my story. Have a happy day.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   Thank you for trying to answer this homework. Let me reiterate subject verb agreeement. When sentences start with “there” or “here,” the subject will always be placed after the verb, so care needs to be taken to identify it correctly. example: There is no limitation to us.   Teacher Venus^^   Hello Venus. >>>CORRECT    Today, I will talk to you about the limitation. >>>Today, I will talk to you about limitation.   I would like to write limitation of learning. >>>I would like to write about the limitation of learning.   You know we had classes for 3 months. >>>CORRECT   Thanks to you, I have been pleased since I received your call at first. >>>Thanks to you, I have been pleased since we had our first class.   I had a great time everyday. >>>CORRECT   That\'s really true. >>>CORRECT   I think that you taught well English to me. >>>I think that you taught me English well.   So, I got confident for speaking in English. >>>So, I got confident in speaking English.   There is no limitation for learning about something. >>>There is no limitation on learning about something, for example, math, English, Korea, science, and simple work.   We can not only learn all of the subject but also wisdom of life. >>>We can not only learn all the subjects but also the wisdom of life.   I mean that if we decide to achieve the goal, there are no fails. >>>I mean, if we decide to achieve our goal, there\'s no failures.   But most of people make their possibility low for themselves. >>>But most of the people decrease their self-esteem.   For example, Someone can say \"I can\'t do it\" before they challenge it. >>>For example, someone can say \"I can\'t do it\" before they try doing it.   There are no limitation to us. but the limitation is decided for ourselves. >>>There\'s no limitation to us but the limitation is decided by ourselves.   Thank you for seeing my story. >>>Thank you for reading my story.   Have a happy day. >>>CORRECT

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