Hello Venus~
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello. Teacher. Do you have a sunny day?
I would like to correct sentence which I write below.
- I always enjoy watching all kinds of movies. Especially, I like foreign movies because it is not only fun but also helpful for improving my ability in English. So When I watch the foreign movie, I carefully hear that actors speak in English. Sometimes, if I can understand that's mean, I'm really interested and excited. Thus, I like genres which like thriller, action and fantasy. I know that when I watch these movies, I alwasy forget about what is worring me.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You are really learning a lot. Some reminders:
1. Check your spelling.
always
2. The present participle is often used when we want to express an active action. In English we add -ing to the infinitive of the verb.
example:
Together with other words:
He came reading around the corner.
He sat reading in the corner.
I saw him reading.
Teacher Venus^^
Hello. Teacher.
>>>Hello Teacher.
Do you have a sunny day?
>>>better: Did you have a great day?
I would like to correct sentence which I write below.
>>>I would like you to correct sentence which I write below.
- I always enjoy watching all kinds of movies.
>>>CORRECT
Especially, I like foreign movies because it is not only fun but also helpful for improving my ability in English.
>>>CORRECT
So When I watch the foreign movie, I carefully hear that actors speak in English.
>>>So when I watch the foreign movie, I carefully hear the actors speaking in English.
Sometimes, if I can understand that\'s mean, I\'m really interested and excited.
>>>Sometimes if I can understand the meaning, I\'m really interested and excited.
Thus, I like genres which like thriller, action and fantasy.
>>>Thus, I like genres such as thriller, action and fantasy.
I know that when I watch these movies, I alwasy forget about what is worring me.
>>>I know that when I watch these movies, I always forget about what worries me.
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