Hello Venus~

2016-03-07 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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Hello. Teacher. Do you have a sunny day? I would like to correct sentence which I write below. - I always enjoy watching all kinds of movies. Especially, I like foreign movies because it is not only fun but also helpful for improving my ability in English. So When I watch the foreign movie, I carefully hear that actors speak in English. Sometimes, if I can understand that's mean, I'm really interested and excited. Thus, I like genres which like thriller, action and fantasy. I know that when I watch these movies, I alwasy forget about what is worring me.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   You are really learning a lot.  Some reminders: 1. Check your spelling. always   2. The present participle is often used when we want to express an active action. In English we add -ing to the infinitive of the verb. example: Together with other words: He came reading around the corner. He sat reading in the corner. I saw him reading.   Teacher Venus^^   Hello. Teacher. >>>Hello Teacher.   Do you have a sunny day? >>>better: Did you have a great day? I would like to correct sentence which I write below. >>>I would like you to correct sentence which I write below. - I always enjoy watching all kinds of movies. >>>CORRECT   Especially, I like foreign movies because it is not only fun but also helpful for improving my ability in English. >>>CORRECT   So When I watch the foreign movie, I carefully hear that actors speak in English. >>>So when I watch the foreign movie, I carefully hear the actors speaking in English.   Sometimes, if I can understand that\'s mean, I\'m really interested and excited. >>>Sometimes if I can understand the meaning, I\'m really interested and excited.   Thus, I like genres which like thriller, action and fantasy. >>>Thus, I like genres such as thriller, action and fantasy.   I know that when I watch these movies, I alwasy forget about what is worring me. >>>I know that when I watch these movies, I always forget about what worries me.

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