Hello Venus~

2016-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: COMPOSITION WRITING: Tell how to discipline an unruly child. Write at least 5 ways. - Hello. This is [이름]. How are you today? Have a great day! I will tell you how to discipline an unruly child. At first, give several rules to a child. For example, Don't play the game 1 hour more, Come in home until 6pm. Second, When a child make a mistake you have to scold him. Third, if he is good at something, praise his behavior.

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Hello [이름]!   You explained well how to discipline an unruly child. Some reminders: 1. come home- common expression 2. Subject-verb agreement examples: A child makes a mistake. Children make mistakes.   Teacher Venus^^   - Hello. >>>CORRECT   This is [이름]. >>>CORRECT   How are you today? >>>CORRECT   Have a great day! >>>CORRECT I will tell you how to discipline an unruly child. >>>CORRECT   At first, give several rules to a child. >>>CORRECT   For example, Don\'t play the game 1 hour more, Come in home until 6pm. >>>For example, don\'t play the game more than 1 hour and come home at 6 pm.   Second, When a child make a mistake you have to scold him. >>>Second, when a child makes a mistake you have to scold him.   Third, if he is good at something, praise his behavior. >>>CORRECT

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