Hello Venus~
학생이 쓴 원문
-HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
COMPOSITION WRITING: Tell how to discipline an unruly child. Write at least 5 ways.
- Hello. This is [이름]. How are you today? Have a great day!
I will tell you how to discipline an unruly child. At first, give several rules to a child. For example, Don't play the game 1 hour more, Come in home until 6pm. Second, When a child make a mistake you have to scold him. Third, if he is good at something, praise his behavior.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You explained well how to discipline an unruly child. Some reminders:
1. come home- common expression
2. Subject-verb agreement
examples: A child makes a mistake.
Children make mistakes.
Teacher Venus^^
- Hello.
>>>CORRECT
This is [이름].
>>>CORRECT
How are you today?
>>>CORRECT
Have a great day!
>>>CORRECT
I will tell you how to discipline an unruly child.
>>>CORRECT
At first, give several rules to a child.
>>>CORRECT
For example, Don\'t play the game 1 hour more, Come in home until 6pm.
>>>For example, don\'t play the game more than 1 hour and come home at 6 pm.
Second, When a child make a mistake you have to scold him.
>>>Second, when a child makes a mistake you have to scold him.
Third, if he is good at something, praise his behavior.
>>>CORRECT
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