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Question: About travel. -My answer: I recently traveled to the jeju island where there are many traveler. It makes traveler happy. When I travel anywhere, I feel excited and interested. The juju island is so far from Seoul and has a lot of tourist attractions. We could ride a horse, buy regional products which are tangerine and grilled black polk. It was really delicious. The polk melted in my mouth. My impressive experience was to drive a car for 2 nights and 3 days. Driving experience was the first in my life. My friend gives me many advices about how to drive a car. So, it makes me interested. And the leisure such as travel, break and hobby helps me get rid of my stress. Especially, the travel is very important for modern people to keep their stress from work.

Hello [이름]!   You did a great job. Some reminders: 1. Check your spelling. example: pork   2. Check your capitalization. example: Jeju Island   3. \'Advice\' is uncountable so you can say \'a piece of advice \' or \'some advice\'.   Teacher Venus^^   -My answer: I recently traveled to the jeju island where there are many traveler. >>>I recently traveled to Jeju Island where there are many travelers.   It makes traveler happy. >>>It makes travelers happy.   When I travel anywhere, I feel excited and interested. >>>CORRECT   The juju island is so far from Seoul and has a lot of tourist attractions. >>>The Jeju Island is so far from Seoul and has a lot of tourist attractions.   We could ride a horse, buy regional products which are tangerine and grilled black polk. >>>We could ride a horse, buy regional products which are tangerine and grilled black pork.   It was really delicious. >>>CORRECT   The polk melted in my mouth. >>>CORRECT   My impressive experience was to drive a car for 2 nights and 3 days. >>>My impressive experience was to drive a car for 3 days and 2 nights.   Driving experience was the first in my life. >>>It was my first driving experience in my life.   My friend gives me many advices about how to drive a car. >>>My friend gives me many pieces of advice about how to drive a car.   So, it makes me interested. >>>CORRECT   And the leisure such as travel, break and hobby helps me get rid of my stress. >>>And the leisure activities such as traveling, enjoying my break and hobby helps me get rid of my stress.   Especially, the travel is very important for modern people to keep their stress from work. >>>Especially, traveling is very important for modern people to keep their stress down at work.