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&HOMEWORK:Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. -I prefer using machines than doing work by hand when I work. Because, machines help me get easily information and perform faster it. For example, when you have to write the report, using machines is more faster than doing work by hand. &HOMEWORK: Some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Others choose to spend time with a large number of friends. Which of these two ways of spending time do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer. -I like to spend time with both some and many friends. There are respective attractions depend on the number of people. In case of a large party, people can't talk deeply to each other. But it is important to keep personal relationship. On the other hand, if there are less 3 people, they can talk to each other about private problem.

Hello [이름]!   You wrote good sentences. You can start a sentence with because, as long as you make sure to fully complete the sentence. One clause beginning with the word because does not constitute a sentence. This is a fragment: because machines help me get information easily and perform faster (wrong)   If you follow the clause beginning with because with a complete independent clause, however, you are in business. These are complete sentences: I prefer using machines than doing work by hand when I work because machines help me get information easily and perform faster. (correct) Because machines help me get information easily and perform faster, I prefer using machines than doing work by hand when I work. (correct)   Teacher Venus^^   &HOMEWORK:Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.-I prefer using machines than doing work by hand when I work. Because, machines help me get easily information and perform faster it. >>>I prefer using machines than doing work by hand when I work because machines help me get information easily and perform faster. For example, when you have to write the report, using machines is more faster than doing work by hand. >>>For example, when you have to write the report, using machines is faster than doing work by hand. &HOMEWORK: Some people prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Others choose to spend time with a large number of friends. Which of these two ways of spending time do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer.-I like to spend time with both some and many friends. >>>CORRECT There are respective attractions depend on the number of people. >>>There are respective attractions depending on the number of people.   In case of a large party, people can\'t talk deeply to each other. >>>CORRECT But it is important to keep personal relationship. >>>But it is important to keep their personal relationship.   On the other hand, if there are less 3 people, they can talk to each other about private problem. >>>On the other hand if there are less than 3 people, they can talk to each other about their private problems.