Hello Verna,

There was a strong earthquake yesterday morning. Japan is famous for an earthquake as you know. Before I came here, I’ve never been concerned about it. When I felt it first in Japan, I was panic. The building was shook. I was really scared. I heard that a strong earthquake of more than magnitude 7~8 will hit within several decades in Japan, especially around Tokyo. Isn’t it a terrible story? Therefore Japanese buy emergency goods like flashlights, cash and food and have a good supply of them at home.

Hi [이름],       I felt worried for you after reading your composition. Please stay safe. I remember an earthquake stroke the Philippines before. It had a very adverse effect specially in the city where I reside right now.   Always have a handy 24 hour kit in your place. See you tomorrow! Love, Verna   There was a strong earthquake yesterday morning. >>Correct  Japan is famous for an earthquake as you know.  >>Japan is famous for earthquake as you know. Before I came here, I’ve never been concerned about it.  >>Before I came here, I was never concern about it. When I felt it first in Japan, I was panic. >> When I first felt it here in Japan, I panicked. The building was shook. >> The building shook.  I was really scared.  >> Correct I heard that a strong earthquake of more than magnitude 7~8 will hit within several decades in Japan, especially around Tokyo.  >>I heard that a strong earthquake with more than 7~8 magnitude will hit Japan within several decades, especially around Tokyo.  Isn't it a terrible story?  >>Correct Therefore Japanese buy emergency goods like flashlights, cash and food and have a good supply of them at home. >>Therefore Japanese people buy emergency goods like flashlights, foods, and the have a sufficient supply of them at home.