Hello Verna,
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This week is enrollment time. I’d like to take a morning class on Friday which starts at 8:30 AM. If I do, I have to change our lesson to earlier time. But I’m not sure right now whether I take that class or not because it is too early and it is for undergraduate students.
Today, I asked a schedule manager of Power English whether I can change time of only Friday’s English lesson. He said that it’s not possible. He also said that if I want to change just one class, I have to change all time. Anyway I am worried about it. I will make a decision by tomorrow. I really want to study with you.
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Hi [이름],
I'm very sad to hear about the news that you told me.
I hope that you would come up with a very good decision
though. I love having you in the class. I hope you will still find time
to study with me. Take care! See you later.
This week is enrollment time.
>> Correct
I’d like to take a morning class on Friday which starts at 8:30 AM.
>>Correct
If I do, I have to change our lesson to earlier time.
>> Correct
But I’m not sure right now whether I take that class or not because it is too early and it is for undergraduate students.
>>But I’m not sure right now whether I would take that class or not because it is too early and it is for undergraduate students.Today, I asked a schedule manager of Power English whether I can change time of only Friday’s English lesson.
>>Today, I asked the manager who fixes the schedule in Power English whether I can change time only on Friday’s English lesson.
He said that it’s not possible.
>>Correct
He also said that if I want to change just one class, I have to change all time.
>>He also said that if I want to change just one class, I have to change all.
Anyway I am worried about it.
>>Correct
I will make a decision by tomorrow.
>>Correct
I really want to study with you.
>>Correct
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