Hello Verna,
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, I'd like to write about my daily life.I have two friends who met in Japanese language class at school last year. We made friend soon. But we couldn't meet each other frequently because we were busy. We didn't meet more than six months even though we made appointments several times. Eventually we met last week.
While we had a lunch, we said to play together. and today we played badminton for one hour. They are boys except me. They were strong so I got tired soon. When I took a break, one boy came closely our court. He was my friend's friend. We played together. It was really pleasant time and hard time. Unfortounately I had to quit the game because I had a night lecture. We made an appointment every Friday to play badminton. I hope to be kept this meeting.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
That was so interesting! I love being with my friends.
Few months ago I lost my phone so I didn't know my friends' numbers.
But this morning my friend sent me a message through text, because she got my number in Facebook.
I'm really very happy about it! I'll see you later!
Love
- Verna -
Today, I'd like to write about my daily life.
>> Correct
I have two friends who met in Japanese language class at school last year.
>>I have two friends whom I met in Japanese language class last year in school.
We made friend soon.
>> We became friends sooner.
But we couldn't meet each other frequently because we were busy.
>> Correct
We didn't meet more than six months even though we made appointments several times.
>>We didn't meet each other for more than six months even though we set appointments several times.
Eventually we met last week.
>> Luckily, we met lat week.
While we had a lunch, we said to play together.
While we had a lunch, we said to play together.
>> While having lunch, we agreed to play together.
and today we played badminton for one hour.
>>Correct
They are boys except me.
>>Correct
They were strong so I got tired soon.
>>They were stronger so I got tired easily.
When I took a break, one boy came closely our court.
>>When I took a break, one guy came closer to our court.
He was my friend's friend.
>>Correct
We played together.
>>Correct
It was really pleasant time and hard time.
>>It was really a pleasant and a hard time.
Unfortounately I had to quit the game because I had a night lecture.
>>Unfortunately I had to quit the game because I had a night lecture.
We made an appointment every Friday to play badminton.
>>We set an appointment to to play badminton every Friday.
I hope to be kept this meeting.
>> I hope we can keep meeting each other.
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