Hello Verna,
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It's nice Friday. The weather is great and the scenery is wonderful.
Tomorrow I'm going to go to Kamakura for ZEN practice. It's a kind of volunteer program for foreign students which the circle that I belong to hosted. Kamakura is a very famous place for the military and political city of medieval Japan. I haven't yet been there so I am so excited. I heard it's a beautiful city because the citizens have tried to conserve greenery and tradition of the city for a long time.
And another wonderful thing is that I'll go together with my lab mate from the Philippine. He is also a member of the circle. No one of his friends will go there. Unfortunately he didn't know how to go there so I suggested going together to him. Now I am worried about it but I'm sure it will be nice experience.
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Hello,
Ow, it's such a very good program of your circle. I hope the success and fulfillment be felt while you are in that group.
Please take care of you lab mate from the Philippines, hahah. I'm so impressed by your composition, it's almost perfect.
More practice and you are good to go.
Take care, be safe and have a TERRIFIC weekend.
---t. verna ---
It's nice Friday. The weather is great and the scenery is wonderful.
>> CorrectTomorrow I'm going to go to Kamakura for ZEN practice.
>> Correct
It's a kind of volunteer program for foreign students which the circle that I belong to hosted.
>> It is a volunteer program for foreign students, a circle that I belong to and I host it at the same time.
Kamakura is a very famous place for the military and political city of medieval Japan.
>> Kamakura is a very famous placefor the military and political city of the medieval Japan.
I haven't yet been there so I am so excited.
>> Correct
I heard it's a beautiful city because the citizens have tried to conserve greenery and tradition of the city for a long time.
>> CorrectAnd another wonderful thing is that I'll go together with my lab mate from the Philippine.
>> Another wonderful thing is that I'll go there together with my lab mate from the Philippines.
He is also a member of the circle.
>> Correct
No one of his friends will go there.
>> Correct
Unfortunately he didn't know how to go there so I suggested going together to him.
>> Unfortunately, he didn't know how to go there so I suggested to go along with him.
Now I am worried about it but I'm sure it will be nice experience.
>> Now, I'm worried about it but I'm sure it will b a nice experience.
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